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3/13/2009 c2 3Edwardjustproposed
Amazing. Your a great writer.
2/3/2009 c1 CarolMN
Very powerful!
2/2/2009 c2 7DobbyWobby
this is a really good idea and really well written. keep going, you really get inside minor charecters heads really well. i like this!

dobby
11/23/2008 c1 17geophf
My goodness!

Reading this story I hear the tick-tick-tick of the clock as each second brings a stronger sense of dread over Esme. What an apt representation: Esme has always been one-dimensionally portrayed as motherly or nurturing. You, however, provided depth, provided reason for her uncompromising love.
11/8/2008 c1 10persephonesfolly
Beautifully written.

I liked the part about the clock and how it fixed Esme's thoughts on the nature of time. You fleshed out her character nicely.
10/16/2008 c2 Marmaduke
First i read Esme's bit, and i was like "God this is so..Esme" and then i read Billy Black bit and i was like "Wow...just wow" You have got their feelings perfectly...Really good
8/13/2008 c2 omgiwantthisaccounttogoaway
woah. intense. ive never read a story from billy's pov. this is original and actually pretty deep. i never thought i would use the word deep when refering to a love story about vampires and werewolves, but i did. :-)
4/10/2008 c1 dlhk
Excellent! You have a beautiful voice for Esme. I loved hearing it!
3/18/2008 c1 2twilightened
Just beautiful.
3/18/2008 c2 twilightened
Great to see Billy's perspective. I love Jacob, so it's nice to get a brief look into his world and family. Have you stopped writing these chapters. I think there is some real potential for some interesting glimpses into some backstory.
3/8/2008 c2 EmmaBites
Oh Gods Oh Gods! i love it! billy is so sweet! oh how i love Esme Chp it was so good! your a amazing writer. I love the way you make the words just work
3/3/2008 c1 15blondie AKA robin
Wow Marcy - this is amazing. I love this line:

"To live forever—never being able to escape the pain of my loss—would be the ultimate punishment: one to be avoided at all costs."

Esme is so in tune with Edward - they share a common history now. This is a great piece of writing.

Robin
9/8/2007 c2 wendilyn
It's nice to see Billy getting some attention. I think he's a great character, and I love how you've given him a voice here at this important time in his life. Wonderful insight as usual! :)

p.s. sorry it took me so long to review!
7/30/2007 c2 8Alcyone23
Once again, I am in awe. You had such excellent control over Billy's character I could actually understand what drives him to be like he is.

I noticed though that these things, H+number, were littered throughout the story. Are they supposed to be there?
7/8/2007 c1 5amoredward
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...wow.

I mean, that was so good. So so so so so so so so so so so good! I don't even know what to say. I mean, you're-This was-Esme's character was-

I loved it! Gosh, that was so well written and clearly you have an amazing talent as an authoress. I mean, to go from the Cullenary Sex Ed (which I am still laughing about since last night) to this-you have an amazing ability to portray such a wide range of emotions it's indescribable. I am seriously jealous of you! I think that the green monster of jealousy has now set up a permanent residence on my shoulder

*turns to monster (who I've named Greenie), nods to each other* Yep, he's there for good now!

So yeah, I just wanted to say that you're amazing and I am now off to read the next chapter!

~Amoredward~
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