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5/3/2007 c1 11LindaRoo
Marcy's not writing fluff

Marcy's writing serious stuff

Though her humor's through the roof

This piece right here is solid proof

That Marcy's imagination flavors

Aren't limited to condoms and mind flayers

I like this so dang much my dear

I give you a towel-smack in the rear!
5/3/2007 c1 2C.ompassionate Revol.utions
Beautiful language, I love it. Update soon!
5/2/2007 c1 3UnicornGoddess95
Wow Marcy. That came across so beautiful! It felt like a personal tour of Esme's mind during that god-awful splash of 'time' they had to endure waiting for the outcome. I love it! I really do! It's so full of emotion and meaning. It displays the emotional bond between Edward and Esme and how what happened to Esme in her human life makes her the strong, caring, protective mother we know and love!

*snaps fingers* Next?
5/2/2007 c1 wendilyn
YAY! This is great! I love the glimpses into these characters. This chapter was nicely put together. I love the theme of time, and how guided Esme's thoughts. I also loved her reflections on her motherly bond with Edward. Love it, Marcy! Who's next? :)
5/2/2007 c1 1Serser
oh wow, this was amazing. i seldom read a story about just Esme. Great job!
5/2/2007 c1 4YourFriendlyNeighborhoodDemon
I loved this. It was really good, I wish I could write like that! Please continue!
5/2/2007 c1 Teak 2
This story is absolutely wonderful! So well written. It's refreshing to hear Esme's point of view; we really hear so little about her. Another great story Marcy.
5/2/2007 c1 2oceaneyes85253
its good, keep going
5/2/2007 c1 1NotMixedEqually
Beautiful. Absolutely so. You captured the very essence of Esme so perfectly. The writing style and the effortless flow of words reminded me of the silent movie era, as does Esme herself. I truly loved this chapter, as I do all your work. Please update soon!
5/2/2007 c1 14SnapdragonSmile
Oh, Marcy. Amazing, amazing, amazing. Perfect tone, perfect everything.
5/2/2007 c1 7GoldenEyesRock
I love how you captured Esme- her old-fashioned way of speaking, and compassion. Great job!
5/2/2007 c1 5stupid shiny volvo driver
I love it and yeah, I cried. Even knowing what the outcome is, I still cried. Maybe it's a mother thing. You have such a wonderful way with bringing thoughts and words to life in the minor characters. Whenever I see an alert for one of your FF's, I stop everything and read it because I know it will move me in some way. Thank you so much!

Stupid Shiny Volvo Driver
5/2/2007 c1 7Tee2007
It turned out great! Way to pick through all the red marks and find the right "voice" for your story...Just keep writing hun, cause you ROCK!
5/2/2007 c1 epona04
absolutely amazingly brilliant. you make me so jealous! hehehehe lovely
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