for Naruto vs Sasuke: The Aftermath6/27/2021 c79 Guest
I'm sorry but the Naruto and Sasuke fight is completely terrible... you spend so much time developing Naruto's abilities and Then You Suddenly Jerk Off Sasuke abilties Out Of The Blue despite him being much more incompetent then his Canon Counterpart. The Fight Should Be One Sided. Lol Why Naruto Having So Much Trouble in This Story!?
I'm sorry but the Naruto and Sasuke fight is completely terrible... you spend so much time developing Naruto's abilities and Then You Suddenly Jerk Off Sasuke abilties Out Of The Blue despite him being much more incompetent then his Canon Counterpart. The Fight Should Be One Sided. Lol Why Naruto Having So Much Trouble in This Story!?
5/20/2021 c13 Broski
I hate having eyes
I hate having eyes
5/18/2021 c79 anonymouse47
well i dont mind a cliffhanger or three but i do mind that its been five months and the story still hasn't been updated
well i dont mind a cliffhanger or three but i do mind that its been five months and the story still hasn't been updated
5/12/2021 c79 TheSCodex
This story is really good so far but i have to say, Naruto's fight with Sasuke is not really all that good and it kinda doesn't make sense either, you spent a lot of time developing Naruto's abilities such as Sage mode or even that chapter explaining his agreement with Kurama and how he's able to use the Kurama mode now but he is fighting with a tail cloak instead of fighting with sage mode, also i get why you chose to leave it in a cliffhanger there but it doesn't really make sense for him to basicly toy with Sasuke all fight and then be pretty much defeated with an outburst of chakra out of nowhere after being pretty much fataly wounded, which is another thing that doesn't quite fit well with the way Naruto's character has been developing so far, he's been basicly craving Sasuke's blood and when he pretty much strikes him dead he says sorry? It feels a lot like a step back to have him still caring about Sasuke all the and after everything Sasuke has done, it seems like i'm ranting and i pretty much am, i really like the story and i think it's pretty good but this fight kinda feels like a disappoinment.
When Naruto somehow manages to snap at Sasuke once again, he will be pretty much be done for, Sasuke is strong but Naruto is stronger no doubt.
I guess the fight isn't bad per say but it doesn't really make sense.
PS. I get Hinata is really in love with Naruto and all that, but having her collapsing every time he's in any kind of danger? Besides the clone was still there, which is proof that he is still alive and she knows that much.
This story is really good so far but i have to say, Naruto's fight with Sasuke is not really all that good and it kinda doesn't make sense either, you spent a lot of time developing Naruto's abilities such as Sage mode or even that chapter explaining his agreement with Kurama and how he's able to use the Kurama mode now but he is fighting with a tail cloak instead of fighting with sage mode, also i get why you chose to leave it in a cliffhanger there but it doesn't really make sense for him to basicly toy with Sasuke all fight and then be pretty much defeated with an outburst of chakra out of nowhere after being pretty much fataly wounded, which is another thing that doesn't quite fit well with the way Naruto's character has been developing so far, he's been basicly craving Sasuke's blood and when he pretty much strikes him dead he says sorry? It feels a lot like a step back to have him still caring about Sasuke all the and after everything Sasuke has done, it seems like i'm ranting and i pretty much am, i really like the story and i think it's pretty good but this fight kinda feels like a disappoinment.
When Naruto somehow manages to snap at Sasuke once again, he will be pretty much be done for, Sasuke is strong but Naruto is stronger no doubt.
I guess the fight isn't bad per say but it doesn't really make sense.
PS. I get Hinata is really in love with Naruto and all that, but having her collapsing every time he's in any kind of danger? Besides the clone was still there, which is proof that he is still alive and she knows that much.
4/29/2021 c1 Soraslove
Did this kakashi not know naruto was minato's son, or didn't care? I mean the canon kakashi obviously didn't give two fuck, even if he knew.
Did this kakashi not know naruto was minato's son, or didn't care? I mean the canon kakashi obviously didn't give two fuck, even if he knew.
4/18/2021 c16 iShyboy
Content wise there's so much in this chapter, but the lack of proofing made it a jumbled mess, many changes of POV without breaks made it not immersive and confusing.
Content wise there's so much in this chapter, but the lack of proofing made it a jumbled mess, many changes of POV without breaks made it not immersive and confusing.
4/18/2021 c12 iShyboy
Again, bashing for the sake of bashing with adults acting like 8yo kids. It's not bad to bash bad guys, but you mustn't forget that kids be kids and adults be adults, you can have mature kids being willful and adults being immature, but you can't cardboard adults into kids, that's bad writing.
Let's see what's going next.
Grammar in this chapter wasn't bad, not much Your You're mistakes as the ones before.
Again, bashing for the sake of bashing with adults acting like 8yo kids. It's not bad to bash bad guys, but you mustn't forget that kids be kids and adults be adults, you can have mature kids being willful and adults being immature, but you can't cardboard adults into kids, that's bad writing.
Let's see what's going next.
Grammar in this chapter wasn't bad, not much Your You're mistakes as the ones before.
4/17/2021 c1 iShyboy
Bashing not bashing? More like Wake up call? Kakashi is really the worst. No matter how canon try to butter up or Kishimoto pile up powers in the prick ass, it's just plain wrong to Naruto still function as human after Pain battle. I'm smiling ear to ear for this. OOC Kurama is always a pleasure.
Bashing not bashing? More like Wake up call? Kakashi is really the worst. No matter how canon try to butter up or Kishimoto pile up powers in the prick ass, it's just plain wrong to Naruto still function as human after Pain battle. I'm smiling ear to ear for this. OOC Kurama is always a pleasure.
4/16/2021 c79 ninjaj40
Hey i really like where this fight is leading to thinking that sasuke was going to while it looks like both hinata's baby and naruto might die. Also hairy man monke is real so a hell yea from me.
Hey i really like where this fight is leading to thinking that sasuke was going to while it looks like both hinata's baby and naruto might die. Also hairy man monke is real so a hell yea from me.
4/4/2021 c24 otakufanfic1000
If hinata gets kidnapped, i'm gonna quit the fic i'm not joking. my heart can't take this anymore. what happened to sakura was really sad. but now narusaku is canon alongside naruhina so okay.
If hinata gets kidnapped, i'm gonna quit the fic i'm not joking. my heart can't take this anymore. what happened to sakura was really sad. but now narusaku is canon alongside naruhina so okay.
4/1/2021 c79 Zack Winter
This story has it all! Drama, romance, suspense, amazing and interesting side stories that work in tandem with the main story-line. The fight scenes are fantastic and written so well you can picture them in your mind as you're reading them. And all the pairings within the story make sense and are believable to the reader. I could on and on, but this is one of the best stories on this website and I'm so glad that I found it.
This story has it all! Drama, romance, suspense, amazing and interesting side stories that work in tandem with the main story-line. The fight scenes are fantastic and written so well you can picture them in your mind as you're reading them. And all the pairings within the story make sense and are believable to the reader. I could on and on, but this is one of the best stories on this website and I'm so glad that I found it.
3/20/2021 c14 otakufanfic1000
Hell yeah do ya mean jiraiya or neji cause like ughhhhh. not even sakura deserved that much brutality.
Hell yeah do ya mean jiraiya or neji cause like ughhhhh. not even sakura deserved that much brutality.