for The Name Game10/9/2013 c5 
37PrayerGirl
This story is really fabulous! It's too good to just leave unfinished! Please please please update this again! You are a very talented writer and this story just needs to continue!
37PrayerGirlThis story is really fabulous! It's too good to just leave unfinished! Please please please update this again! You are a very talented writer and this story just needs to continue!
10/30/2012 c5 Roze
So...I just found your lovely fiction here. Please update, this is super interesting.
So...I just found your lovely fiction here. Please update, this is super interesting.
8/8/2012 c5 BwichLasagna
I would be so happy if you updated this because its never to late to update... Your story is really good.
I would be so happy if you updated this because its never to late to update... Your story is really good.
3/1/2012 c5 Alli
Dude I wanna hear how the story ends! Please, don't leave me hanging!
Dude I wanna hear how the story ends! Please, don't leave me hanging!
7/22/2009 c2 3Martyr of Musique
Update, you have to!
I know you must got a mind block, or perphaps you just don't have the time anymore..but such a good writing style should not go to waste.
Even, if you rewrite it, this plot is commendable and I have to congratulate you on keeping a good balance of writing your characters in characters but still adding your own originality to them( not just spooning them out of the text).
But please, this is one of my favourites, and it would be a crying shame fro it to be abandoned!( even a note to say you won't continue would be satisfactory )
xx
p.s if you would re-do it, please don't scrap the first chapter, it's sensational and has so much plot potential! ^^
3Martyr of MusiqueUpdate, you have to!
I know you must got a mind block, or perphaps you just don't have the time anymore..but such a good writing style should not go to waste.
Even, if you rewrite it, this plot is commendable and I have to congratulate you on keeping a good balance of writing your characters in characters but still adding your own originality to them( not just spooning them out of the text).
But please, this is one of my favourites, and it would be a crying shame fro it to be abandoned!( even a note to say you won't continue would be satisfactory )
xx
p.s if you would re-do it, please don't scrap the first chapter, it's sensational and has so much plot potential! ^^
12/18/2007 c5 17Luna the sheikah
This fic is amazing! I like that you kept BJ in character and older Lydia level headed. I especially like your twist of throwing Vladmir in there ;) I know you haven't updated this story in a few months but I hope my little cheer will give you some inspiration.
Great work!
17Luna the sheikahThis fic is amazing! I like that you kept BJ in character and older Lydia level headed. I especially like your twist of throwing Vladmir in there ;) I know you haven't updated this story in a few months but I hope my little cheer will give you some inspiration.
Great work!
9/10/2007 c5 20VirgoMaiden
I am so in love with this story so far! The characters, the moments...and the overall plot! Love it tons, update when you can! ^^
20VirgoMaidenI am so in love with this story so far! The characters, the moments...and the overall plot! Love it tons, update when you can! ^^
8/12/2007 c5 8TheLadyBookworm
Please keep up the story. I love the premise for it. And I really hate it when people don''t finish what they start.
8TheLadyBookwormPlease keep up the story. I love the premise for it. And I really hate it when people don''t finish what they start.
7/27/2007 c5 8RaeLaser1
Chalksticks? Anyways, MAN Beej is annoying! Right on! You should have Lydia get back at him somehow . . . I am very pleased with this chappie, and demand more quickly! 8^D
8RaeLaser1Chalksticks? Anyways, MAN Beej is annoying! Right on! You should have Lydia get back at him somehow . . . I am very pleased with this chappie, and demand more quickly! 8^D
7/27/2007 c5 9BunniGirl
Great update, felt short but that's because we fans only desire more.
I wasn't able to find the foreshadowing unless you meant the whole "Tell me or I'll be forced to beat it out of you" thing Lydia said - which is probably NOT what you meant. I just didn't have the patience after the long morning I've had to look for it. Maybe latter. Meh. So no cookies for me. Blah.
I liked the characterizations you made in this chapter, from Beetlejuice attempting not to stare at Lydia's body to her conveying convincing body language at how she wasn't interested in such a thing, and to the original plot twist of instead of binding or marrying or anything overdone like that, we focus on Beetlejuice's real name. I wish more light was shed on the villain because I'm not at all familiar with him at all and it'd be interesting as to WHY he's going after Lydia or if he has a personal grudge against Beetlejuice or something interesting like that - it'd also be a way to draw out a chapter.
Like I said, it felt too short but that's because I just wanted more of the good stuff.
Good chapter, thanks for updating.
9BunniGirlGreat update, felt short but that's because we fans only desire more.
I wasn't able to find the foreshadowing unless you meant the whole "Tell me or I'll be forced to beat it out of you" thing Lydia said - which is probably NOT what you meant. I just didn't have the patience after the long morning I've had to look for it. Maybe latter. Meh. So no cookies for me. Blah.
I liked the characterizations you made in this chapter, from Beetlejuice attempting not to stare at Lydia's body to her conveying convincing body language at how she wasn't interested in such a thing, and to the original plot twist of instead of binding or marrying or anything overdone like that, we focus on Beetlejuice's real name. I wish more light was shed on the villain because I'm not at all familiar with him at all and it'd be interesting as to WHY he's going after Lydia or if he has a personal grudge against Beetlejuice or something interesting like that - it'd also be a way to draw out a chapter.
Like I said, it felt too short but that's because I just wanted more of the good stuff.
Good chapter, thanks for updating.
7/26/2007 c4 21Mad-Hatter-LCarol
yeah, she's a bit low there- but she's hurt, just woke up, and that's an awuful lot prossecse in one go... i mean, there's two lives (well, one life and one afterlife if you wanna be nitpicky) in the line...
21Mad-Hatter-LCarolyeah, she's a bit low there- but she's hurt, just woke up, and that's an awuful lot prossecse in one go... i mean, there's two lives (well, one life and one afterlife if you wanna be nitpicky) in the line...
7/22/2007 c4 9BunniGirl
Juno came off more preachy than she should've... even with the threat of exorcism, it would've been cool if B jumped in with comedic relief to loosen the tension. Still, you set up the premise pretty well. It'd be great if we had more Ghost with the Most talk - you could do a LOT of creative funny stuff with that.
9BunniGirlJuno came off more preachy than she should've... even with the threat of exorcism, it would've been cool if B jumped in with comedic relief to loosen the tension. Still, you set up the premise pretty well. It'd be great if we had more Ghost with the Most talk - you could do a LOT of creative funny stuff with that.
7/10/2007 c4 8TheLadyBookworm
Hey love the story, Can't wait to read more. Lyds character only fell a little flat to you because this section was more of an explanation or "talking heads" than an action chapter. You still managed to pull her off though. I know as things pickup Her charry will be back to the way you think she should be. Nicely done up to this point though. "Talking head" pieces are difficult to keep moving, be proud of yourself. Hope to see more from you soon.
8TheLadyBookwormHey love the story, Can't wait to read more. Lyds character only fell a little flat to you because this section was more of an explanation or "talking heads" than an action chapter. You still managed to pull her off though. I know as things pickup Her charry will be back to the way you think she should be. Nicely done up to this point though. "Talking head" pieces are difficult to keep moving, be proud of yourself. Hope to see more from you soon.