5/4/2007 c1 Jill
I'll beta this. Your grammar and punctuation are exceedingly dodgy. No offense, of course. It's a fun start.
I'll beta this. Your grammar and punctuation are exceedingly dodgy. No offense, of course. It's a fun start.
5/4/2007 c1 Jill
I'll beta this. Your grammar and punctuation are exceedingly dodgy. No offense, of course. It's a fun start.
I'll beta this. Your grammar and punctuation are exceedingly dodgy. No offense, of course. It's a fun start.
5/4/2007 c1 8The Bird Of Fire
im lovin this so far... all u have to do is promise me that none of the main characters are going ot die at the end...
keep up the gud work
update soon
You Know You love Me...
im lovin this so far... all u have to do is promise me that none of the main characters are going ot die at the end...
keep up the gud work
update soon
You Know You love Me...