for The Marauders and Me12/30/2021 c15 Guest
Run-on Example: Mate, fix your "coarse" it is course, basic and I understand you are trying to edit but man it is so damn triggering to see such repeated obvious spelling mistakes unless that is how people not from the USA spell it, in which case I am extremely sorry, although I still think it should be changed for us here at the 'Merica,
Run-on Example: Mate, fix your "coarse" it is course, basic and I understand you are trying to edit but man it is so damn triggering to see such repeated obvious spelling mistakes unless that is how people not from the USA spell it, in which case I am extremely sorry, although I still think it should be changed for us here at the 'Merica,
8/7/2021 c1 jenniferleigh2013
Hmm... it could do with a beta, but I wouldn't say it's at all badly written. Had the author proof read, I'm sure the bits here and there that sound off would have been smoother.
Much too soon to praise or critique too much. Definitely will have to read more in order to determine. My only real advice at this point is to think about true reactions as well as proof reading. You should always do at least one.
Hmm... it could do with a beta, but I wouldn't say it's at all badly written. Had the author proof read, I'm sure the bits here and there that sound off would have been smoother.
Much too soon to praise or critique too much. Definitely will have to read more in order to determine. My only real advice at this point is to think about true reactions as well as proof reading. You should always do at least one.
12/22/2020 c6 
1SlytherinPrincessPansy
THIS IS AMAZING! I WAS ALREADY IN LOVE WITH SIRIUS BUT AFTER READING THIS SO FAR MY HEART HAS THROWN ITSELF TO SIRIUS OMG THIS STORY IS AMAZING! ️️️
1SlytherinPrincessPansyTHIS IS AMAZING! I WAS ALREADY IN LOVE WITH SIRIUS BUT AFTER READING THIS SO FAR MY HEART HAS THROWN ITSELF TO SIRIUS OMG THIS STORY IS AMAZING! ️️️
9/26/2020 c1 DominoDemeanour
I WILL ALWAYS COME BACK TO THIS STORY i love u so much i hope ur doing well <3
I WILL ALWAYS COME BACK TO THIS STORY i love u so much i hope ur doing well <3
9/21/2020 c2 lizzieblack10
Lmao
Sirius is me I can bearly remember my friends names let a Alone my year
Lmao
Sirius is me I can bearly remember my friends names let a Alone my year
1/6/2020 c1 10SiriusHadesStark
you dont even understand how happy i am to have found this. i read this story a few years ago and remembered it a couple of weeks ago and have been searching for it ever since... i actually screamed when i found it. youre an amazing writer and im so excited to delve back into this story again
10SiriusHadesStarkyou dont even understand how happy i am to have found this. i read this story a few years ago and remembered it a couple of weeks ago and have been searching for it ever since... i actually screamed when i found it. youre an amazing writer and im so excited to delve back into this story again
9/27/2019 c11 Guest
I’m laughing because I have brothers named Alex, Andrew, and Adam. Along with a cousin named Adrian. Hey! It’s tradition lol
I’m laughing because I have brothers named Alex, Andrew, and Adam. Along with a cousin named Adrian. Hey! It’s tradition lol
3/24/2019 c54 12In Pursuit of Magic
This was very well written. I enjoyed it. And the fact that you had the guts to kill your character off at the end, even if she woke up in the real world. But still. Not a lot of people are willing to do that. I've only seen it happen twice. Yours and a Merlin Fanfic a long while back. Good on you and keep writing!
12In Pursuit of MagicThis was very well written. I enjoyed it. And the fact that you had the guts to kill your character off at the end, even if she woke up in the real world. But still. Not a lot of people are willing to do that. I've only seen it happen twice. Yours and a Merlin Fanfic a long while back. Good on you and keep writing!
1/21/2019 c8 Amelia
J.K. Rowling should read this. It’s that good.
J.K. Rowling should read this. It’s that good.
1/19/2019 c1 Ella
Gosh! This is good! I love it!
Gosh! This is good! I love it!
9/16/2018 c5 Guest
Very nice story loved it.
Very nice story loved it.
9/15/2018 c1 Guest
Deserves a thousand likes! I laughed so much!
Deserves a thousand likes! I laughed so much!
6/22/2018 c5 Britt
I was enjoying your character right up until I realized she would bullySeverus right along with the rest of the boys. Honestly, that was the one thing that bothered me the most about the books. People crapped on Voldemort of enjoying the pains of others but what makes the mauraders any different the way they harass Severus? I will give your character 2 chapters to redeem herself and if not I am gonna quit reading this story because I will upchuck otherwise in disgust otherwise and your character won't be worth the cost of my lunch
I was enjoying your character right up until I realized she would bullySeverus right along with the rest of the boys. Honestly, that was the one thing that bothered me the most about the books. People crapped on Voldemort of enjoying the pains of others but what makes the mauraders any different the way they harass Severus? I will give your character 2 chapters to redeem herself and if not I am gonna quit reading this story because I will upchuck otherwise in disgust otherwise and your character won't be worth the cost of my lunch