5/10/2007 c1 4ahaxamazingxsin
hmm...

interesting plot.

you are missing quotation marks at the ends of quotes, so it was confusing.

Another think I didn't get was how she was a distant cousin of Harry's. Harry's got no living relatives other than the Dursleys.

I think this whole idea could go somewhere. I havent read a time-travel ish fic before, so this is my first look at one.

It just needs a bit more editing and Potter-Proofing.

Also love the name Charlotte. That's the name I gave my character in my SBOC fic that I completely refuse to post :shrug:.

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