
1/2/2014 c1 rose
love it
love it
5/3/2010 c1 Snowkid
real fun, I loved the burn the paper, and then like magic let it restore or something.
and that she became a captain.
but it was really funny too.
real fun, I loved the burn the paper, and then like magic let it restore or something.
and that she became a captain.
but it was really funny too.
8/8/2008 c1
82Ngoc Chau
This was very sweet. I wished you could've given their twins japanese names like AIKO, SAE, TOMOKO or, CHIYO.
And if you really want to give them twin names or something that sounds alike
KIYOKO & KIYOMI
HIKARU & KAORU
TSUKIKO & TSUBASA
Hope you will change it but not expecting too much. Just a suggestion, you don't have to do it but would really love it if you did.

This was very sweet. I wished you could've given their twins japanese names like AIKO, SAE, TOMOKO or, CHIYO.
And if you really want to give them twin names or something that sounds alike
KIYOKO & KIYOMI
HIKARU & KAORU
TSUKIKO & TSUBASA
Hope you will change it but not expecting too much. Just a suggestion, you don't have to do it but would really love it if you did.
4/23/2008 c1
40WinterVines
Hello! I read your fics back in the day when I wasn't a member, but I remember them! This one was my favorite out of them, although I liked them all. Poor Shunsui...but it does provide some humor. Thanks for the great reads! -KG

Hello! I read your fics back in the day when I wasn't a member, but I remember them! This one was my favorite out of them, although I liked them all. Poor Shunsui...but it does provide some humor. Thanks for the great reads! -KG
4/3/2008 c1 Pyromaniac-Girl
That was a cool fic.
It is cool the way that you ended it with them telling their kids about how they got together.
Have a good day!
That was a cool fic.
It is cool the way that you ended it with them telling their kids about how they got together.
Have a good day!
11/26/2007 c1
13Ishasuki Mitochi
lol, I just wanted to tell you that this is my 5th time reading this story, and now that I'm writing my own story, I've realized that reviews make my day, and they probably make other people's day too. So consider this my little note of approval. I really liked this story. And in sending this note, I hope to make a good author's day. Keep writing,
Isahasuki

lol, I just wanted to tell you that this is my 5th time reading this story, and now that I'm writing my own story, I've realized that reviews make my day, and they probably make other people's day too. So consider this my little note of approval. I really liked this story. And in sending this note, I hope to make a good author's day. Keep writing,
Isahasuki
6/8/2007 c1
14Lenah C.C
aw...hey, this is sweet! ^^
"Dad you're slow." said jillian.
lol. i love that line ^^ thx 4 the story..
-Genasyz-

aw...hey, this is sweet! ^^
"Dad you're slow." said jillian.
lol. i love that line ^^ thx 4 the story..
-Genasyz-
5/8/2007 c1
2Flaming Kyo
Woot so KAWAI!
That was so sweet I still smiling from ear to ear. Nanao was a bit, um, sour...poor Shunsui, she didn't realise how lucky she got! *wants to marry shunsui*
Write more ^_^

Woot so KAWAI!
That was so sweet I still smiling from ear to ear. Nanao was a bit, um, sour...poor Shunsui, she didn't realise how lucky she got! *wants to marry shunsui*
Write more ^_^
5/7/2007 c1
24Maelynne Naveen
aw, very sweet - stubborn Nanao-chan... only took her another century to come around XD

aw, very sweet - stubborn Nanao-chan... only took her another century to come around XD
5/6/2007 c1
25Sweetdeath04
AH! KAWAII(sp?)! These two are like THE BEST! So nice to see more fanfiction about them! Love it!

AH! KAWAII(sp?)! These two are like THE BEST! So nice to see more fanfiction about them! Love it!