5/28/2007 c1 striking
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v suspenseful. i like
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v suspenseful. i like
5/28/2007 c6 Avis
hmm, interesting indeed.
:) me like.
The story's kind of slow, but i supose its okay if you want to make it really long.
hmm, interesting indeed.
:) me like.
The story's kind of slow, but i supose its okay if you want to make it really long.
5/28/2007 c1 rabidharryfan
Harry's a bit slow on the uptake isn't he?
The story's ok but you need a beta.
Harry's a bit slow on the uptake isn't he?
The story's ok but you need a beta.
5/23/2007 c5 Avis
bwahaha, thats so funny xD
I can imagine harry charging at lucius and the guy fainting. ironic humor, that i like.
update soon
bwahaha, thats so funny xD
I can imagine harry charging at lucius and the guy fainting. ironic humor, that i like.
update soon
5/23/2007 c4 Avis
nicely descriptive. :)
though funny pwns all.
nicely descriptive. :)
though funny pwns all.
5/23/2007 c3 Avis
well that's funny heehee i fell off my chair at the jelly part. i love jelly, hek every1 does. what sources of evil doesnt like it?
well that's funny heehee i fell off my chair at the jelly part. i love jelly, hek every1 does. what sources of evil doesnt like it?
5/23/2007 c2 Avis
hm well the prologue you wrote doesnt seem very much like a prologue, more like a pro-chapter. if that makes any sense. if not then oh wells. malfoy seems too nice
hm well the prologue you wrote doesnt seem very much like a prologue, more like a pro-chapter. if that makes any sense. if not then oh wells. malfoy seems too nice
5/23/2007 c1 Avis
very good writing style you have. i think having the letter there is nice. the pawprint is cute. im glad you decided to let padfoot live. now i have 4 more chaps to read yay :)
very good writing style you have. i think having the letter there is nice. the pawprint is cute. im glad you decided to let padfoot live. now i have 4 more chaps to read yay :)
5/23/2007 c5 kristen
Please update soon, I love the story so far:)
Please update soon, I love the story so far:)
5/22/2007 c5 7Marluciel
¡Oh! eso interesaba muy! actualiza por favor pronto, 'causa que quiera saber lo que sucede luego!
hahaha sorry. I just HAD to try out my spanish. update soon, okay? thanks XD
¡Oh! eso interesaba muy! actualiza por favor pronto, 'causa que quiera saber lo que sucede luego!
hahaha sorry. I just HAD to try out my spanish. update soon, okay? thanks XD
5/21/2007 c5 Twilight016
update quickly! i love this story!
update quickly! i love this story!
5/17/2007 c4 13Lisi the slayer
Hey!
WAY 2 GO !
Liking this alot, I wish Jk Rowling digged deeper into the character that is Draco Malfoy, could you please do me a favour.
read Violet fire and eternal love and review it !
Regards
Lisi the slayer
Hey!
WAY 2 GO !
Liking this alot, I wish Jk Rowling digged deeper into the character that is Draco Malfoy, could you please do me a favour.
read Violet fire and eternal love and review it !
Regards
Lisi the slayer