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6/9/2008 c1 7ForeverRiddick
-jaw drops- oh..my..god...that was AMAZING!
12/29/2007 c1 7Paradisical815
I just want to say something about your actual style: I absolutely love it. I love how you got inside her mind, even from a third person point of view. I love how you don't wonder around; you have a point, you make it, you drive it home, and then you get out. I've read so many oneshots where the author wonders around so much you begin to forget what you were reading in the first place. And with some points, that's what you have to do, but there's just a beautiful simplicity to your style that I love.
5/8/2007 c1 7JacklynK
That is absolutely great! I love it when Jack/Kyra isn't turned into a sap, and your take on her emotions towards Imam and Riddick are very interesting. I like the line about bleeding irony.

As to your doubt about the rating, it's borderline, but I think you're fine. There's a lot of death, but it's not that graphic, and the language isn't too bad. I wouldn't worry. Good job on this one, I know it's going into my favorites!

-J

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