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5/10/2007 c1 77Danny Phantom SG-1
Breaking-heartedly adorable! Absolutely stunning! How do you remember lines from the movie so well? I have the memory of a goldfish! Anyway, I love the dynamic between MJ and Harry (though I still despise MJ...) The only problem I found (sorry for looking...it's my editing instinct...) is that "For the forth time" should be "For the fourth time." I positively adore the last line. The nickname reserved for Petey is now used for Harry...because she's fickle and can't pick which one to love. *sigh* Well, it was very well-written and I think you should write more Spider-Man...just a little less MJ would be nice. :)

-DPSG1
5/9/2007 c1 thisisoldandunused
That's beautiful!
5/9/2007 c1 1thenandnow
Amazing! I really liked Harry and MJ together after SM3. There needs to be more fanfics like this! Great job.
5/9/2007 c1 12shannello
That was rather beautiful. Though it was made up of mostly speech, it was still mind-numbing and made me smile. MJ and Harry make a better couple than MJ and Peter, mostly because they're so cute. lol But they do love eachother, and that's what matters most.

Great work.

J.C.

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