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14Duffster21
i can officially sy i love you
well, uhh... you know what i mean right
i really hope you do cuz i don't really want to hurt you
14Duffster21i can officially sy i love you
well, uhh... you know what i mean right
i really hope you do cuz i don't really want to hurt you
6/1/2007 c3 Delsunhine86
Godamn fan fiction would let me read this last night. I was having a shit fit. Anyways Hello, ;) Love anything you have about BIT, Dean and Lauren, anything, so it is no surprise I LOVE this, I want more. Plenty more. The scenes had me remembering the chapters so now I want to go back and read them, then probably I should read the ones before, and the ones after. Just to make sure I didn’t miss anything right?;) Hehe
Love del
Godamn fan fiction would let me read this last night. I was having a shit fit. Anyways Hello, ;) Love anything you have about BIT, Dean and Lauren, anything, so it is no surprise I LOVE this, I want more. Plenty more. The scenes had me remembering the chapters so now I want to go back and read them, then probably I should read the ones before, and the ones after. Just to make sure I didn’t miss anything right?;) Hehe
Love del
5/30/2007 c3 9The Goddess Aurora
Okay , Ch. 2 was great. I love that episode, but the one where they're in the old mansion and Dean is like "the more pressing question is whay everyone thinks we're gay." and Sam calls Dean Butch. That's funny, and I love Lauren's take on it.
Frankly, were that to happen I could totally see Dean trying to have sex with Lauren on one of the picnic tables, just to prove his sexual preference.
Ch. 3, Babbling!Lauren is one of my favorite people too. She's so funny. Did she honestly expect Dean to let it go? That'd be the one downside to hitting that, he would be forever bringing it up to embarass the crap out of you.
Winksies, Aurora
9The Goddess AuroraOkay , Ch. 2 was great. I love that episode, but the one where they're in the old mansion and Dean is like "the more pressing question is whay everyone thinks we're gay." and Sam calls Dean Butch. That's funny, and I love Lauren's take on it.
Frankly, were that to happen I could totally see Dean trying to have sex with Lauren on one of the picnic tables, just to prove his sexual preference.
Ch. 3, Babbling!Lauren is one of my favorite people too. She's so funny. Did she honestly expect Dean to let it go? That'd be the one downside to hitting that, he would be forever bringing it up to embarass the crap out of you.
Winksies, Aurora
5/30/2007 c3 12Mirajane Scarlet
You know, I even know what part of the story that would have been from. lol. And I loved that scene.
12Mirajane ScarletYou know, I even know what part of the story that would have been from. lol. And I loved that scene.
5/30/2007 c2 Mirajane Scarlet
Okay, seriously, laughing so hard I'm almost crying!
"I stuffed a fist into my mouth, shoulders shaking as I caught the look on Dean’s face. He was stunned – again, and then he sucked it up, coming out on top, as usual. Damn, I have totally got to stop thinking in insinuatingly sexual terms. “Right,” he said. “Well, I’m gonna go talk to Larry, ‘kay honey?”
And then he playfully smacked Sam on the ass."
Greatest freaking line I've read in a long time.
Okay, seriously, laughing so hard I'm almost crying!
"I stuffed a fist into my mouth, shoulders shaking as I caught the look on Dean’s face. He was stunned – again, and then he sucked it up, coming out on top, as usual. Damn, I have totally got to stop thinking in insinuatingly sexual terms. “Right,” he said. “Well, I’m gonna go talk to Larry, ‘kay honey?”
And then he playfully smacked Sam on the ass."
Greatest freaking line I've read in a long time.
5/30/2007 c3 9Licensetocreep
oh same here!
its why I LOVE writing for Jesse when she does her own little babble rants!
like her rant about the phone and the evil water drops in COS
hehe
oh, we have FAR to much fun Pixc, we really do!
Sia
9Licensetocreepoh same here!
its why I LOVE writing for Jesse when she does her own little babble rants!
like her rant about the phone and the evil water drops in COS
hehe
oh, we have FAR to much fun Pixc, we really do!
Sia
5/17/2007 c1 megan
feel free to reflect rocks my way..
feel free to reflect rocks my way..
5/16/2007 c1 75Digital Tempest
I definitely know how this goes. I have a lot of these type scenes that will never make it into stories because I can't make them probable. Never thought to just put them together as a sort of "easter egg" for fandom, though. I'm a "Supernatural" fan, but haven't read many fics worth my effort, not saying there aren't any out there. I just have so little time to trudge through them.
I can tell you put a lot of thought into your writing. Your writing has a very distinctive style that so many writers lack. I felt like, just from the little I've read, that I could pick your story out of a lineup. To me, your writing has a personal feel to it. It doesn't alienate the reader and make them realize it's just a story. It's easy to get wrapped up into, very real, very gritty, very nicely done.
Keep writing.-DT
75Digital TempestI definitely know how this goes. I have a lot of these type scenes that will never make it into stories because I can't make them probable. Never thought to just put them together as a sort of "easter egg" for fandom, though. I'm a "Supernatural" fan, but haven't read many fics worth my effort, not saying there aren't any out there. I just have so little time to trudge through them.
I can tell you put a lot of thought into your writing. Your writing has a very distinctive style that so many writers lack. I felt like, just from the little I've read, that I could pick your story out of a lineup. To me, your writing has a personal feel to it. It doesn't alienate the reader and make them realize it's just a story. It's easy to get wrapped up into, very real, very gritty, very nicely done.
Keep writing.-DT
5/11/2007 c1 estellasharina
Reading this made me go squee. ^^
And I've finally come out of hiding-and-reading-but-not-reviewing. :D
Sorry - I'm not being too constructive, am I? Blame my cold, which kept me awake for most of the night. I'm in pain.
Reading this made me go squee. ^^
And I've finally come out of hiding-and-reading-but-not-reviewing. :D
Sorry - I'm not being too constructive, am I? Blame my cold, which kept me awake for most of the night. I'm in pain.
5/10/2007 c1 9The Goddess Aurora
Yay! See the nudging works. ;D
Now you know you didn't have to take that out of BIT, that scene would have been Hawt, but I see why you did. Lauren and Dean Pr0n (:? never heard this expression before) makes me smile.
This was just what I needed after watching "Things fall Apart" or whatever that hated episode was called. Still not over it, just going to pretend it didn't happen until I can deal.
Excercise that license sweetie! You write it and I'll definitely read it.
Aurora
9The Goddess AuroraYay! See the nudging works. ;D
Now you know you didn't have to take that out of BIT, that scene would have been Hawt, but I see why you did. Lauren and Dean Pr0n (:? never heard this expression before) makes me smile.
This was just what I needed after watching "Things fall Apart" or whatever that hated episode was called. Still not over it, just going to pretend it didn't happen until I can deal.
Excercise that license sweetie! You write it and I'll definitely read it.
Aurora
5/10/2007 c1 9Licensetocreep
oh
my
GODS!
this was just PERFECT!
completely made my day!
so Lauren-like to be humming Metallica whilst sucking a guy off. very in character
especially with the whole THANK GOD FOR DARKNESS
Sia
9Licensetocreepoh
my
GODS!
this was just PERFECT!
completely made my day!
so Lauren-like to be humming Metallica whilst sucking a guy off. very in character
especially with the whole THANK GOD FOR DARKNESS
Sia