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7/30/2007 c1 You Know Me
Hey I read this on paper! It's nice, maybe a little short. Looked longer on paper, for sure.
5/11/2007 c1 26Andrew Fisher15
Interesting.
5/11/2007 c1 1iwenttohogwarts
"If I left anything, or if I get any mail, send it to Harry’s."

I liked the story/letter...up till that line. Then I LOVED it. :D Harry ftw.
5/11/2007 c1 77Danny Phantom SG-1
Ouch! That hurt ever-so-slightly. I like your one-shots (even though they're all about MJ...) and you should keep writing them. The last line is sure to get Pete's attention. "send it to Harry's...". Ow. "And it's not here that I feel betrayed by." should be "And it's not HER that I feel betrayed by." Anyway, nicely done. I sort of understand her predicament in this story (can't blame her for wanting to leave him here...Harry did seem a little more loyal at this point in the movie, though you added the part about them kissing in the dark alley...unfair to Petey, but I suppose that is the point of writing MJ/Harry fanfics) Great job!

-DPSG1

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