
7/7/2023 c10 Zeke Hooper
good story.
good story.
5/13/2023 c3 zSnako
There isnt enough angst. And Naruto should get angry at Sakura in some sort of way.
There isnt enough angst. And Naruto should get angry at Sakura in some sort of way.
8/20/2021 c7 Eunyck
YOOOO THAT WAS SPICYYYYY. I love it hahhaha. I enjoyed how flirty and playful naruto was i couldn't handle it!
YOOOO THAT WAS SPICYYYYY. I love it hahhaha. I enjoyed how flirty and playful naruto was i couldn't handle it!
5/31/2021 c1 Guest
fair enough.. a good and unique take on the anime... hope this turns out well.
fair enough.. a good and unique take on the anime... hope this turns out well.
10/5/2020 c8 Reader Name Null
The part with Hinata was really cute, a part of me died while reading the dialogue from Ino’s part, and I kinda would’ve perfected if he didn’t go the whole “I always knew” route but whatever. Was pretty cute book not gonna read the epilogue but yeah
The part with Hinata was really cute, a part of me died while reading the dialogue from Ino’s part, and I kinda would’ve perfected if he didn’t go the whole “I always knew” route but whatever. Was pretty cute book not gonna read the epilogue but yeah
10/5/2020 c7 Guest
Nononononno Naruto is a shounen protagonist how dare you show him going through puberty fuck you very unchristian like lmao
Nononononno Naruto is a shounen protagonist how dare you show him going through puberty fuck you very unchristian like lmao
10/5/2020 c6 Reader Name Null
The entire conversation between Hinata and Sakura in the bathroom was fucking hilarious. “Well at least being a shy nice girl is better than being a mean bitch that bashes his head in all the time." Hinata responded without a single stutter.” AHAHAHAHAHHAHH. Also Naruto sounded like a robot this chapter
The entire conversation between Hinata and Sakura in the bathroom was fucking hilarious. “Well at least being a shy nice girl is better than being a mean bitch that bashes his head in all the time." Hinata responded without a single stutter.” AHAHAHAHAHHAHH. Also Naruto sounded like a robot this chapter
9/29/2019 c6 Pratyush
It is getting interesting... I really like the rivalry between the three. good work. ;)
It is getting interesting... I really like the rivalry between the three. good work. ;)
9/29/2019 c5 Pratyush
First of all, I really like those disclaimers. And as I mentioned before, I like that you are changing the story a bit. However,it is great.
First of all, I really like those disclaimers. And as I mentioned before, I like that you are changing the story a bit. However,it is great.
9/29/2019 c4 Pratyush
I like the fact that you have started to change the original story a bit. I loved it. You have managed to make this story engaging. Love your work! ;)
I like the fact that you have started to change the original story a bit. I loved it. You have managed to make this story engaging. Love your work! ;)
9/28/2019 c3 Pratyush
This chapter was also good but I hope the ending is a happy ending. I don't know why but I think the ending is going to be sad.
This chapter was also good but I hope the ending is a happy ending. I don't know why but I think the ending is going to be sad.
9/28/2019 c2 Pratyush
Man, this is getting very interesting. I can't wait to know what happened next. It is like the whole series with sakura POV. I love it, and you of course .:)
Man, this is getting very interesting. I can't wait to know what happened next. It is like the whole series with sakura POV. I love it, and you of course .:)
9/28/2019 c1 Pratyush
It was quite beautiful but there were some grammar mistakes. While you are reviewing, do it with a friend. Otherwise I like your work. (_)
It was quite beautiful but there were some grammar mistakes. While you are reviewing, do it with a friend. Otherwise I like your work. (_)