for I love you Kyoya?7/18/2013 c6 teresaaado
Yayyyyy! Haruhi is pregnant again! I kinda feel bad for Kyoya but Tamaki and Haruhi are more suitable! Yay! Thank you for your time! Arigato!
Yayyyyy! Haruhi is pregnant again! I kinda feel bad for Kyoya but Tamaki and Haruhi are more suitable! Yay! Thank you for your time! Arigato!
5/1/2011 c6 Koshivuh
This had a wonderful story line :] I really enjoyed it. Sometimes it was a little hard to read because of the grammar, but that's okay. I think if you guys were to get a beta and have them edit this, it would be even better :] Just a thought. It was wonderful in any case.
This had a wonderful story line :] I really enjoyed it. Sometimes it was a little hard to read because of the grammar, but that's okay. I think if you guys were to get a beta and have them edit this, it would be even better :] Just a thought. It was wonderful in any case.
3/11/2011 c6 
2xXQtbookwormXx
OMG I LUV THIS FANFICTION!
I honestly think this should be the fanilie episode in the anime even tho theres already one! but awesome i love it so much you rock
2xXQtbookwormXxOMG I LUV THIS FANFICTION!
I honestly think this should be the fanilie episode in the anime even tho theres already one! but awesome i love it so much you rock
4/24/2010 c4 2landoflala
once again i catch your typo of wedding.its quite hilarious because i saw it misspelled in a restaurant once, it read: Weeding, 3rd floor. as i said, love this story. WRITE MORE HARUHI/KYOYA/TAMAKI. i think it connects with the actual story really well.
2landoflalaonce again i catch your typo of wedding.its quite hilarious because i saw it misspelled in a restaurant once, it read: Weeding, 3rd floor. as i said, love this story. WRITE MORE HARUHI/KYOYA/TAMAKI. i think it connects with the actual story really well.
4/24/2010 c3 landoflala
I think this story is extraordinary. The plot may be somewhat rushed and cliche but i think you made it work. what put a smile on my face was when i thought you made a grammar mistake here :
"I will respond for what I have done, but you and she will pay for this!"
when it is, in fact, correct.
and this :
until your weeding is announced to everyone
was a typo.
i dont know, ive been grammar stressed lately by my school, so yes.
dont mind me. anyhow. great story. ill stalk your page for more of your stories after this. WRITE SOON.
I think this story is extraordinary. The plot may be somewhat rushed and cliche but i think you made it work. what put a smile on my face was when i thought you made a grammar mistake here :
"I will respond for what I have done, but you and she will pay for this!"
when it is, in fact, correct.
and this :
until your weeding is announced to everyone
was a typo.
i dont know, ive been grammar stressed lately by my school, so yes.
dont mind me. anyhow. great story. ill stalk your page for more of your stories after this. WRITE SOON.
5/11/2008 c1 2Mangajuicexd
So...
I had a little trouble reading this, but the story line is alright with me. Th efeelings seemed to be a little bit rushed. But all in all you really know how to play up the characters.
Just practice the Spelling, Grammar and correct use of Words because these are really good weapons when doing a literary piece such as this one.
Keep it up...
Practice makes perfect.
2MangajuicexdSo...
I had a little trouble reading this, but the story line is alright with me. Th efeelings seemed to be a little bit rushed. But all in all you really know how to play up the characters.
Just practice the Spelling, Grammar and correct use of Words because these are really good weapons when doing a literary piece such as this one.
Keep it up...
Practice makes perfect.