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3/17/2010 c1 1cherublover
Amazing idea for a story you should keep writing

maybe have his life in prison go on for a bit like lauren keeps visiting and stuff and maybe he gets out and has a run in with a cherub person and something it could be really cool
2/20/2010 c1 2justanotherhannahfan
Arent we glad that James found CHERUB... or that CHERUB found him...?

That was really well written. I love the way you showed how he cared for Lauren.
12/21/2009 c1 4caniGou
I like it ! Well done :). It's just a shame it wasn't longer :)
11/15/2009 c1 2redgmystr
um, w-o-w.

need i say more? it sure beats anything i could ever dream to write.

that was so cool - you described the scene and character's emotion so well

Well done
1/5/2009 c1 Callie
this is good. I like it a lot. Sad, I almost cried. I really wanted to. I've got a few month to go until I can post my own and it still won't be very good. That's beside the point. Yours was really good. What about Kerry? What is she going to do?
12/7/2008 c1 6willhelmbroon-cherubfan
This story is exelent. A great way to use a paradox. This is one of my favorite storys.
5/6/2008 c1 24Magna Parva
i like it - it's going on my faves list... but please tell me this - why didn't CHERUB consider him? you could have explained that somewhere...
6/11/2007 c1 1Sausage King
Boring.

Well it would be.

As a one shot it was the perfect format,

I LOVED IT!

It shows the harsh reality and an eye opener to what shit ass world we live in!

Lauren wearing make-up, even at her tender age. I LOVED IT! It truely shook me.

The title was good, but I would prefer to take the profanity up a notch. Not too far though, instead of mess, screw, possibly.

I Love it. An Amazing Story. An Amazing Author.
6/4/2007 c1 Guest
5/5
5/15/2007 c1 2Independent-Chick-92
Omg you have to write more!Plz

when does cherub come in to the mix?

After all it is cherub fanfiction!

N-E-waz totally love the story!

hope you write more!

Amanda
5/13/2007 c1 4Namenick
To Mr Willie Wonka.

I know where you live. Mwhahaha

So watch out.

How dare you write that about me!

I have a challenge for you.

If you can write a better fic, I will not call you a chicken and set the evil vampire powers of a gay band on you.

There, so write me a good fic, or die.

lol.

yours sincerely,

erin
5/13/2007 c1 Willie Wonka
It was a complete load of rubish. It completly ripped off the cherub series and sets a bad example for young children. It show that 14 year old girls are wearing make up which is bad for the body and it exposes children to violent examples like shooting 3 people in cold blood. Other than all that rambeling on it was better than anything i could probaly ever write and who ever wrote it must have no life at all, spending their days reading fan fic and writing it. Top job but i couldnt have done better.
5/13/2007 c1 erin
wow, im going to be full of myself and rave about my own story.

Erin's story rocks.

Erin's story pwns.

Erin is full of herself.

Erin is amazing.

Erin wonders if anyone will ever read this.

Erin know she should be paying attention in IT.

Erin is very bored now.

Erin hates whoever blocked myspace from school.

Erin will go back to saying how good she is.

Erin pwns you.

Erin is stupid.

Erin is cool.

Erin is brilliant.

Erin has to go now before she gets kicked off.

But she wants you to leave nice reviews :)
5/13/2007 c1 3crazysophie
that was really good.
5/12/2007 c1 2Dartboy
I like the story, I don't normally like what if stories but this was different,I liked it 3.5/5

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