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4/28/2008 c1 toolazytotype
Deep. xDD Awesome job? O.o
5/25/2007 c1 Captain in the Galley
Tee-hee, curvaceous.
5/14/2007 c1 5Mask1
Superbe. I really liked it. An excellent description of how Rand might have fallen in with Lan Fear especially taken what we see in the if Moiraine hadn't shoved her through the archway foretelling.

I find it most compelling for while you have outlined Rand's reasons for his fall (a good choice of word by the way) you don't cheapen it. You show how it would likely be a variety of things that in the end would biond him to her. Excitment, working together, information on the age of legends, instruction on channeling, power, love and the key ingredient to any fall of Rand's lust. Fantastically done. A very enjoyable read. I look forward to the rest of these one shots.


P.S Loved the way you slipped in he is the new 'god of evil' ir he wins but replaced Shaitan instead of re sealing him and that Lan has stayed the stronger of the two. Both of these were hinted and aluded to in the books, so excellent research and realism.

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