for your da one!5/31/2013 c3 mikasakuralover1901
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6/22/2012 c1 
10Laughable Ink
So, this is your first fanfic? I'm guessing you're around the age of 11 to 12? It's kind of impressive. :)
I read your other stories and I must say, there was a tremendous change from your present stories to your past. There was really a big change! :D
Girl, I have a feeling you will turned out to be a good author when you grow up. .
Keep writing and never give up! :P
10Laughable InkSo, this is your first fanfic? I'm guessing you're around the age of 11 to 12? It's kind of impressive. :)
I read your other stories and I must say, there was a tremendous change from your present stories to your past. There was really a big change! :D
Girl, I have a feeling you will turned out to be a good author when you grow up. .
Keep writing and never give up! :P
5/9/2009 c1 WickedEgg
haha I think the begining is funny and the rest isnt bad at all. My advice would be to take the story slower, other then that keep writing!
haha I think the begining is funny and the rest isnt bad at all. My advice would be to take the story slower, other then that keep writing!
5/27/2008 c7 5Xxice-darkfire-kradxX
hey! what's the title of the ong? i really like it :) hahhaha anyway nice fic! :D
5Xxice-darkfire-kradxXhey! what's the title of the ong? i really like it :) hahhaha anyway nice fic! :D
11/14/2007 c7 12Elv
Um.. I think this.. is not very nice. It's too rushed and you didn't use punctuation marks. It's hard to read because of the lack of punctuation marks in most of the dialougues. And Ruka's English name is Luca, not Luka. You didn't manage to express what you intend to write. Maybe it's your first fic, but I hope you can improve in your future fics.
12ElvUm.. I think this.. is not very nice. It's too rushed and you didn't use punctuation marks. It's hard to read because of the lack of punctuation marks in most of the dialougues. And Ruka's English name is Luca, not Luka. You didn't manage to express what you intend to write. Maybe it's your first fic, but I hope you can improve in your future fics.
10/15/2007 c4 nissikisses
hi hi friend! i thought mikan's already in natsume's room? she moved yesterday right!
hi hi friend! i thought mikan's already in natsume's room? she moved yesterday right!