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5/31/2013 c7 mikasakuralover1901
omg such a good story I love it
5/31/2013 c3 mikasakuralover1901
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6/22/2012 c1 10Laughable Ink
So, this is your first fanfic? I'm guessing you're around the age of 11 to 12? It's kind of impressive. :)

I read your other stories and I must say, there was a tremendous change from your present stories to your past. There was really a big change! :D

Girl, I have a feeling you will turned out to be a good author when you grow up. .

Keep writing and never give up! :P
6/18/2009 c7 mikanxnatsume1228
really good story i hope you make more :}
5/9/2009 c1 WickedEgg
haha I think the begining is funny and the rest isnt bad at all. My advice would be to take the story slower, other then that keep writing!
5/27/2008 c7 5Xxice-darkfire-kradxX
hey! what's the title of the ong? i really like it :) hahhaha anyway nice fic! :D
11/29/2007 c7 3Caritate
Aww...this wasn't bad for your first fic ever...
11/14/2007 c7 12Elv
Um.. I think this.. is not very nice. It's too rushed and you didn't use punctuation marks. It's hard to read because of the lack of punctuation marks in most of the dialougues. And Ruka's English name is Luca, not Luka. You didn't manage to express what you intend to write. Maybe it's your first fic, but I hope you can improve in your future fics.
10/15/2007 c7 1nissikisses
did you compose the song? whose song is it?
10/15/2007 c6 nissikisses
ohh no! ohh yess! natsume's crying!

woohh! unbelievable! great! haha!
10/15/2007 c5 nissikisses
where's natsume? where is he? that bitch sumire!
10/15/2007 c4 nissikisses
hi hi friend! i thought mikan's already in natsume's room? she moved yesterday right!
10/15/2007 c3 nissikisses
hahaha! natsume's scared! funny! hahaha! soo soo funny!
10/15/2007 c2 nissikisses
hahaha..natsume's taking advantage..funny!
10/15/2007 c1 nissikisses
hahaha... natsume's soo obvious..!
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