for what has she done?2/10/2009 c9 None Spoken
Please update again.
This is getting really good..
And could you quit with the Authors notes? Nobody really cares or wants to know why you take so long to update, they just want to see THAT you updated.
Sincerely,
Kya
Please update again.
This is getting really good..
And could you quit with the Authors notes? Nobody really cares or wants to know why you take so long to update, they just want to see THAT you updated.
Sincerely,
Kya
2/7/2009 c9 Nopenotactive
Maybe Bella changes and is much much more beautiful than Rose. Rose decides to come back and see if Bella actually died but comes back on the day of their wedding.. Emmett being their minister.
Maybe Bella changes and is much much more beautiful than Rose. Rose decides to come back and see if Bella actually died but comes back on the day of their wedding.. Emmett being their minister.
2/6/2009 c9 kitkatt26
oh no poor bella! rosealie is a bitch! i like your story, update soon please!
lots of love! -Kitkatt
oh no poor bella! rosealie is a bitch! i like your story, update soon please!
lots of love! -Kitkatt
2/3/2009 c8 
3Mrs.Lexi Cullen
This is such a good story! I realy want to hear more, please keep writting chapters, and soon!
3Mrs.Lexi CullenThis is such a good story! I realy want to hear more, please keep writting chapters, and soon!
2/3/2009 c6 Elizabeth
i love the story it was really good i think u should make it a book
i love the story it was really good i think u should make it a book
2/3/2009 c9 when night calls
this chapter isn't as bad as you think it is! it may be short, but it got us into Rosalie's head!
i have experienced writers' block, and i agree, it sucks! i used to have stories up on this site before i had to take them down (long story involving my mother, let's put it that way) and it would always take me FOREVER to update!
one thing for the future - having a brief outline for a story before you post it might help you out for any future stories (i know it won't help for this one since it's already up).
this chapter isn't as bad as you think it is! it may be short, but it got us into Rosalie's head!
i have experienced writers' block, and i agree, it sucks! i used to have stories up on this site before i had to take them down (long story involving my mother, let's put it that way) and it would always take me FOREVER to update!
one thing for the future - having a brief outline for a story before you post it might help you out for any future stories (i know it won't help for this one since it's already up).
2/3/2009 c9 LIZ
WOW! NEVER READ A STORY LIKE THIS BEFORE! OH! YOU CAN HAVE BELLA TURN INTO SOMETHING ELSE BESIDES A VAMPIRE BECAUSE SHE HAS SOME CREATURE'S BLOOD IN HER! SHE COULD BE THE START OF A WHOLE NEW SPECIES!
WOW! NEVER READ A STORY LIKE THIS BEFORE! OH! YOU CAN HAVE BELLA TURN INTO SOMETHING ELSE BESIDES A VAMPIRE BECAUSE SHE HAS SOME CREATURE'S BLOOD IN HER! SHE COULD BE THE START OF A WHOLE NEW SPECIES!
2/3/2009 c1 girl
ugh ok due, shes' happy iwth Emmet, in Eclispe, she din't love Edward but wodner why he din't love her
ugh ok due, shes' happy iwth Emmet, in Eclispe, she din't love Edward but wodner why he din't love her