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7/30/2011 c1 BakerStreetIsLastRefugeOfHope
A great story. Very well written.
2/18/2009 c1 PrincessaFang
Wicked awesome poem! And it fits Bella pretty well, so great job! ^^
10/22/2008 c1 9la saboteuse
This is really, really good.

It quite acurately describes 'New-Moon-Bella'.

I very much liked your diction and syntax; the effect was good.
10/10/2007 c1 me
i dont mean to seem emo, but i totaly agree with this, it not only fits bellas life, but my own as well.
8/10/2007 c1 7Mysticstar
Aww, that's so good! But anything you write is good, so it should come as no surprise. But it really is a thoughtful poem. I'm horrible at poems. .
7/6/2007 c1 1NotMixedEqually
Lovely. You're an amazing writer. In my opinion, I think the poem might work best if applied to the time when Edward was gone, but no matter where you put it, it's still wonderful.
6/15/2007 c1 1EdwardDazzlesMe
Wow, that was really good.

You have really been blessed with a great gift from God, your writing talents.
6/2/2007 c1 gamila1609
Very touching...

Glad you didn't try to make stuff rhyme. Some of the poems here don't make sense because the rhymes seem forced and completely disenchant the poem. Yours, though, works nicely!

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