for After you'd gone6/29/2007 c4 
2chemicalgirl31
hhum... how can i say... SPIKE AND DAWN, HUG IN A BED, SPIKE HAL-NAKED, PLAYING WHIT HER HAIR? I WANT SPUFFY, NO SPAWN... SPAWN ITS... EW! (sorry, im little overeacting sometimes)
2chemicalgirl31hhum... how can i say... SPIKE AND DAWN, HUG IN A BED, SPIKE HAL-NAKED, PLAYING WHIT HER HAIR? I WANT SPUFFY, NO SPAWN... SPAWN ITS... EW! (sorry, im little overeacting sometimes)
5/25/2007 c3 RabidReject
Little dialogue heavy, and I'm not sure what is going on. That being said I like the story premise and your dialogue is pretty nice.
Little dialogue heavy, and I'm not sure what is going on. That being said I like the story premise and your dialogue is pretty nice.
5/24/2007 c2 11Neo Princess Moon
O thank God! You had me worried for a little with the D/S thing. Hurry and update! I wanna get to the Spuffy.
11Neo Princess MoonO thank God! You had me worried for a little with the D/S thing. Hurry and update! I wanna get to the Spuffy.
5/18/2007 c1 11Neo Princess Moon
You definatly got some potential here. Personally I get impatiant in any story when I have to wait to see Buffy and Spike interacting, but I have the feeling that this one is going to be worth the wait. ;) One quick note, you might want to edit your summery, cuz you have some typeos in it. I'll be awaiting the next chapter.
11Neo Princess MoonYou definatly got some potential here. Personally I get impatiant in any story when I have to wait to see Buffy and Spike interacting, but I have the feeling that this one is going to be worth the wait. ;) One quick note, you might want to edit your summery, cuz you have some typeos in it. I'll be awaiting the next chapter.
5/17/2007 c1 1katyjg
that was really good please continue as i love buffy and spike and want to find out what wouldhappen if they saw each other again!
1katyjgthat was really good please continue as i love buffy and spike and want to find out what wouldhappen if they saw each other again!
5/17/2007 c1 2chemicalgirl31
thats cool, but when the hellmout was destroy, all the town is detroy. so where dawn, buffy and all the others characters are?
2chemicalgirl31thats cool, but when the hellmout was destroy, all the town is detroy. so where dawn, buffy and all the others characters are?