for Teardrops and Broken Hearts1/19/2009 c1 LeahElizabeth
I loved the Remus/Tonks pairing so I'm always thrilled when I find GOOD fanfiction about the pairing. You got the characters exactly how I pictured them. I love it. Good job!
I loved the Remus/Tonks pairing so I'm always thrilled when I find GOOD fanfiction about the pairing. You got the characters exactly how I pictured them. I love it. Good job!
9/12/2007 c2 
24WandaXmaximoff
Wow! That was awesome, and worked great with or without the information in HBP.
I think you captured Lupin and Tonks, and their emotions really well.
My only suggestion is break up some of the dialogue a little, because a lot of it is grouped together and it makes it hard to know who said what.
Aside from that though, fantastic story and I'll be keeping an eye out for more of your work!
~Wanda
24WandaXmaximoffWow! That was awesome, and worked great with or without the information in HBP.
I think you captured Lupin and Tonks, and their emotions really well.
My only suggestion is break up some of the dialogue a little, because a lot of it is grouped together and it makes it hard to know who said what.
Aside from that though, fantastic story and I'll be keeping an eye out for more of your work!
~Wanda
8/4/2007 c2 9Bee's Girl
I agree with the other review of the suddenness, but since you originally WERENT going to continue it, I understand you wanted it to be short.
I am also immensely pleased that you did continue it.
Very well done!
Mollywobbles!
9Bee's GirlI agree with the other review of the suddenness, but since you originally WERENT going to continue it, I understand you wanted it to be short.
I am also immensely pleased that you did continue it.
Very well done!
Mollywobbles!
6/8/2007 c2 3Sorceress Ivy
*wipes tears away and sniffles* Thats beautiful! *cries* I like how you added Mollywobbles! First class! Wonderful! Love you sweetie.
-Ivy
3Sorceress Ivy*wipes tears away and sniffles* Thats beautiful! *cries* I like how you added Mollywobbles! First class! Wonderful! Love you sweetie.
-Ivy
6/5/2007 c2 10Streamrose
*FANG IRL SCREAM* YES! I love it, I really do. Seriously. I REALLY LOVE IT. *breaths* *is done*
10Streamrose*FANG IRL SCREAM* YES! I love it, I really do. Seriously. I REALLY LOVE IT. *breaths* *is done*
6/2/2007 c2 5An Aspiring Author
i loved your story! especially the ending although it seemed a little bit sudden. anyways, very fluffy and sweet and well-written!
5An Aspiring Authori loved your story! especially the ending although it seemed a little bit sudden. anyways, very fluffy and sweet and well-written!
6/2/2007 c2 to lazy to log in
wow! remus finnally got scense knocked into him! i wonder how harry will react? probably shocked. u know how remus denied tonks cause he might put her life in danger cause hes a were wolf its the same between harry and ginny!though harrys not a werewolf.
wow! remus finnally got scense knocked into him! i wonder how harry will react? probably shocked. u know how remus denied tonks cause he might put her life in danger cause hes a were wolf its the same between harry and ginny!though harrys not a werewolf.
5/31/2007 c1 10Streamrose
Very good. Best I've read in a while. Might I suggest a Chapter Two where Remus comes home?
10StreamroseVery good. Best I've read in a while. Might I suggest a Chapter Two where Remus comes home?
5/19/2007 c1 4Cute-Cookie
I loved it! Was a bit hard to read with it all bunched together, but it was god..! Loved the bit where Sirius sticks the photo on the wall :)
4Cute-CookieI loved it! Was a bit hard to read with it all bunched together, but it was god..! Loved the bit where Sirius sticks the photo on the wall :)
5/19/2007 c1 Maugin
Big fan of Lupin/Tonks. I nearly squealed when I found out about them. This is lovely - btu so sad! Please, please let it get happier!
I'll be looking out for the next chapter (there'd better be one!) with a great deal of interest.
And it better be good cuz this is the first HP fic i've been interested in (im normally an LotR girl) so it all hangs with you!
Love Maugs
Big fan of Lupin/Tonks. I nearly squealed when I found out about them. This is lovely - btu so sad! Please, please let it get happier!
I'll be looking out for the next chapter (there'd better be one!) with a great deal of interest.
And it better be good cuz this is the first HP fic i've been interested in (im normally an LotR girl) so it all hangs with you!
Love Maugs