
5/21/2007 c1
4Light at the End of the Tunnel
wow. you captured his feelings perfectly. wow. the only thing that would make it better would be to make the spaced out words at the end one single line. it was kinda choppy.

wow. you captured his feelings perfectly. wow. the only thing that would make it better would be to make the spaced out words at the end one single line. it was kinda choppy.
5/21/2007 c1
6Aiyoku-otome
This story is really good. I liked it a lot. It reminds of a similar situation that I was...er...nevermind. But I just wanted to give you 10 thumbs up on your story. Simply Brilliant- to me of course.
Ja-ne

This story is really good. I liked it a lot. It reminds of a similar situation that I was...er...nevermind. But I just wanted to give you 10 thumbs up on your story. Simply Brilliant- to me of course.
Ja-ne