for Haruhi Suou7/14/2016 c3 
2rachel5029
Now I want to find out what Kyoya's definition of special clothes is for her. I wonder what Tamaki will change into. I can't believe that they are going to take care of a baby together. Even if it is a robot. I figured he would just make her take care of the baby and he wouldn't take care of it at all. Super, Super, Super excited for the next chapter.
2rachel5029Now I want to find out what Kyoya's definition of special clothes is for her. I wonder what Tamaki will change into. I can't believe that they are going to take care of a baby together. Even if it is a robot. I figured he would just make her take care of the baby and he wouldn't take care of it at all. Super, Super, Super excited for the next chapter.
7/14/2016 c2 rachel5029
I can't believe that he allowed her to call him an idiot. I wonder how they'll act around each other tomorrow. But she does make him happy so hopefully he will treat her right not like a useless wife. Super, Super, Super exited for the next chapter.
I can't believe that he allowed her to call him an idiot. I wonder how they'll act around each other tomorrow. But she does make him happy so hopefully he will treat her right not like a useless wife. Super, Super, Super exited for the next chapter.
7/14/2016 c1 rachel5029
Oh my goodness! always thought that they would be partners for this kind of a project.
Super, Super, Super excited for the next chapter.
Oh my goodness! always thought that they would be partners for this kind of a project.
Super, Super, Super excited for the next chapter.
10/6/2015 c3 5Writer for a thought
I've been waiting for a fanfiction like this! I've always wanted to read one, I just couldn't find the person to write it or anything.
5Writer for a thoughtI've been waiting for a fanfiction like this! I've always wanted to read one, I just couldn't find the person to write it or anything.
7/4/2015 c2 1delete-right-now-please-124
You had a black butler reference in there...hmmm...I like it...
1delete-right-now-please-124You had a black butler reference in there...hmmm...I like it...
2/15/2015 c8 britany
Sooooooo this is technically what happened
Sooooooo this is technically what happened
3/31/2014 c4 blehface
Uhh...I don't know how to say this but...does anybody else notice something wrong with chapter 4?
Uhh...I don't know how to say this but...does anybody else notice something wrong with chapter 4?
11/24/2013 c2 Otaku girl
There are a lot of errors with his and her and she and he. It's
bit annoying when you accidentally call haruhi a boy or tamaki a girl
There are a lot of errors with his and her and she and he. It's
bit annoying when you accidentally call haruhi a boy or tamaki a girl
7/18/2011 c8 3simz1990
THis would be a perfect story if the grammer and spelling errors weren't aful! I loved the plot, incredibly cute, but it was so hard to follow the story because of terible grammer and spelling.
3simz1990THis would be a perfect story if the grammer and spelling errors weren't aful! I loved the plot, incredibly cute, but it was so hard to follow the story because of terible grammer and spelling.
6/19/2011 c8 8McflyGoonieFaxFan
cant wait for more! If you need an editor give me a mesage and i'll be more than happy to edit it out for you- I saw you had some gramer errors
8McflyGoonieFaxFancant wait for more! If you need an editor give me a mesage and i'll be more than happy to edit it out for you- I saw you had some gramer errors
6/19/2011 c1 McflyGoonieFaxFan
The teachers are leaving two teenagers ALONE in an apartment planing a fake WEDDING and a fake HONEYMOON and pretending to HAVE A KID TOGETHER. Can we say awkward? Lol! In fanfiction world, however, thats one of the most GEINUS ideas i've heard though! Definetly in the top ten- very origional and I cant wait to read the rest!
The teachers are leaving two teenagers ALONE in an apartment planing a fake WEDDING and a fake HONEYMOON and pretending to HAVE A KID TOGETHER. Can we say awkward? Lol! In fanfiction world, however, thats one of the most GEINUS ideas i've heard though! Definetly in the top ten- very origional and I cant wait to read the rest!