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6/1/2007 c1 River Eagle
Hey! This is a good piece of written work!
5/28/2007 c1 jendarra
I was a bit worried when I first started to read this.

But it was wonderfully done. As always you know how Scott and the rest of the family would act.

Poor Scott, of all the things Gordon could find out this would be the worst.

But I did enjoy, I always like reading about them as youngsters.
5/27/2007 c1 26mcj
LOL, as a Dancing Teacher who has more than a normal share of male Dancers in the class, I enjoyed this story immensely. Like other reviewers I was getting alittle worried at what the fate of 12 year old Scott Tracy was going to be and imagine my face when the worst thing that happened to him was a little Pas De Deux. Add a couple of Entrechats & fondu pas de bas my dear friend and it would have been a masterpiece. A sweet and clever little fic.

congratulations.

mcj
5/25/2007 c1 10straywriting
Here I was using an online translation site to try and figure out what the title meant. I thought it was French (is it?).

Funny and enjoyable fic, you had me grinning nearly the whole time. I kept on expecting Scott to go looking through Gordon's box of pictures and find something "incriminating" to get him back with. Perhaps we could see something like that in a sequel? -nudgewink-
5/25/2007 c1 6team.aaf
Wow! I loved this story!

I was laughing so much at Gordon's evil sense of humour, and at some of the images I had of Scott ballet dancing (he's probably IS the last of the boys I could imagine taking part!).

But I also felt really sorry for Scott, he was only helping his teacher because he didn't want to let his family down and the last thing he needed was Gordon taking the mickey!

Well done on another great story! - Glad the challenge theme didn't leave you, else we wouldn't have ended up with this! :-)
5/25/2007 c1 74cathrl
Oh, wow! You really had me going there - I was reading, and looking at the rating, and going "no WAY"...and it wasn't that at all.

I think I need a cold shower after that mental image, too...

Great to see that the challenge is still inspiring people - I really enjoyed this.
5/25/2007 c1 9DeathRealm
Aww I love school-aged stories, they are dead easy to relate to!

I really enjoyed this story, especially the interaction between young Virgil and Scott and then the further trouble with Gordon. For once he saw the error of his ways!

You've made me determined to update my story now, nice job.

DeathRealm.
5/25/2007 c1 60Sam1
I'm so glad that you posted this story! Poor Scotty forced to uphold his end of a promise despite the humiliation he felt.

It was better to see Gordon actually remorseful for dredging up bad memories for his older brother while at the same time planning another prank for Alan. Way to go!
5/24/2007 c1 ms. imagine
Delightful :) You really had me worried that this was going to be an angst-filled trauma story, but what a twist! Very nice treatment of the challenge topic - it's a shame it wasn't ready in time for the even itself, but I'm glad you posted it anyway.

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