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5/26/2007 c1 280b29
Wow...what a thing to change! I never even considered the possibility that Ginny could die as a result of the diary, which you wrote so brilliantly about. XD

You're right in your description of the story, though. Harry's Gryffindor traits are frighteningly pronounced. He knows he's going to get blamed for her death (it'd be even worse if he doesn't, actually; then he would have massive guilt trips), but he knows that Tom Riddle must be defeated, anyway. Even though he sacrifices an innocent girl. Yikes. What a decision.

Definitely faving. Keep up the good work!
5/26/2007 c1 Mahtane
Wow. This is absolutely awesome. I love how your Harry doesn't want to be a hero, but because no one else can/will, he will. The only problem I can see is that he seems a little philosophical for a pancking 12 year old. I can't wait to see this continued. And on that note- will you be continuing your other stories?
5/26/2007 c1 3jak'idiot
wow thats dark~! - but good i think?

i know what you mean harry spends his whole life eather running or pretending its not happaning, its irratating... but on the other hand what kind of adult (never mind a whole population) leaves it to a child to kill a mass murderer, the selfish ones thats who and harry is just following their example and being selfish by just ingnoring it, and wishing it to all go away...

ps sorry for the spelling
5/26/2007 c1 Raebef
Good start! it feels like this is going to be a thinking!harry story but despite the revelation he had this chapter it is still a little hard to believe he would pick up a book. not because the revelation wasn't "powerful" enough, because it was its just that terrible things happen to him all the time and as you said at the beginning it doesn't seem to motivate him. It will be interesting to read in the upcoming chapters how he gets to that point. good luck, sorry for the lack of grammar in this review and i can'tr wait to read the next chapter! (though at this point i would read anything you wrote ^^)
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