
2/13/2009 c2
6bornagoof
wait til abby hears about bella that ought to put a damper on things hope she doesn't get all jealous. lol probably would be a funny sight probably.

wait til abby hears about bella that ought to put a damper on things hope she doesn't get all jealous. lol probably would be a funny sight probably.
2/13/2009 c1 bornagoof
aww so sad but it is his fault and i totally saw this coming! you know him misunderstanding what he saw as in thinking those were bella's kids.
aww so sad but it is his fault and i totally saw this coming! you know him misunderstanding what he saw as in thinking those were bella's kids.
1/21/2009 c4 Sarah
i think your story seven years with no edward is awesome. you really should update soon.
i think your story seven years with no edward is awesome. you really should update soon.
3/17/2008 c4 Madison
AMAZING
AMAZING
2/15/2008 c2 waiting on the world to change
Wow, this was really good. you have really described the abby character well. I can totally imagine her now.
Wow, this was really good. you have really described the abby character well. I can totally imagine her now.
7/26/2007 c4 I KNEW SNAPE WAS A GOOD GUY
i think you should make the vampire girl fall in love with Jake (even though he's a wolf, wait! is he? well, if he is then they should still fall in love because love conqueres all.) And bella should be accidentally bitten by edward at the park because he hadn't fed in awhile. (I'm not trying to take over your story! I just think that would be cool!) Update as soon as you can!
i think you should make the vampire girl fall in love with Jake (even though he's a wolf, wait! is he? well, if he is then they should still fall in love because love conqueres all.) And bella should be accidentally bitten by edward at the park because he hadn't fed in awhile. (I'm not trying to take over your story! I just think that would be cool!) Update as soon as you can!
6/20/2007 c4
4Electric-Blue-Eyes
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more!
It was...amasing, i want to know what happens with her and Jacob, and then her and Edward, and Bella and the rest of the Cullens, and then how the rest of the Cullens will react to Edward doing this and YEAH! please write more!
xo

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more!
It was...amasing, i want to know what happens with her and Jacob, and then her and Edward, and Bella and the rest of the Cullens, and then how the rest of the Cullens will react to Edward doing this and YEAH! please write more!
xo
6/16/2007 c4
21stepbehind29
NO! Bella has to be with JAKE! It's the law. *pouts* but...I liked Bella with Jake better...
update soon!

NO! Bella has to be with JAKE! It's the law. *pouts* but...I liked Bella with Jake better...
update soon!
6/15/2007 c4
4Mollytigerc
OMG! I completely Jacob asked bella to marry him. Then her reaction made me laugh. ^.^ I can't wait for more. You must come from camp baring many presents(chapters). I will be very sad to have to wait that long for some chapters. T_T
Update Soon. Even if soon isn't soon.

OMG! I completely Jacob asked bella to marry him. Then her reaction made me laugh. ^.^ I can't wait for more. You must come from camp baring many presents(chapters). I will be very sad to have to wait that long for some chapters. T_T
Update Soon. Even if soon isn't soon.
6/15/2007 c4
5Simply Emma
really good i love it! yay edward and bella kissed! tehehe im happy well update really really soon too!

really good i love it! yay edward and bella kissed! tehehe im happy well update really really soon too!