for Your Wrath Had Freckles6/6/2007 c1 RustyAdina
I think the different POV worked really well - I loved your demon, he was cool, and hearing about Hell and all the paperwork and stuff was funny. The only thing that took away was how you used the language. I think it was a good idea, but for me it was a little too colloquial and made it a little harder to read. But that's just my opinion :) Otherwise I thought it rocked!
I think the different POV worked really well - I loved your demon, he was cool, and hearing about Hell and all the paperwork and stuff was funny. The only thing that took away was how you used the language. I think it was a good idea, but for me it was a little too colloquial and made it a little harder to read. But that's just my opinion :) Otherwise I thought it rocked!
6/3/2007 c1 Diva0789
awesome!...ill see if i can find the story thats on here and send you the link k?
awesome!...ill see if i can find the story thats on here and send you the link k?
5/30/2007 c1 
9The Goddess Aurora
lol. Your demon was a hick. And the POV was hilarious, it was like that epi 'Tall Tales' with the story being told from the boys' separate POV's, so funny.
Anywho, sorry it took me so long to read, been busy.
Smooches,
Aurora
9The Goddess Auroralol. Your demon was a hick. And the POV was hilarious, it was like that epi 'Tall Tales' with the story being told from the boys' separate POV's, so funny.
Anywho, sorry it took me so long to read, been busy.
Smooches,
Aurora