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10/13/2013 c7 ghost tale
Is van gonna tell the truth why he was there when Hitomi and her kids where returning to Gaea. Wouldn't Hitomi be surprise about it.
10/15/2007 c7 Alucius
Just found this story, and I do like it. It's an interesting dynamic where you have twins and one can't stand the father, when the other loves him. I'm interested to see how you'll take care of this mystery woman. She's bitten off more than she can chew taking on the love of the girl from the mystic moon :)
10/8/2007 c7 13serenityrain2233
good but dont you think it was a little short there...

bye now...
10/8/2007 c7 4Inda
oh keep it comign boy a little early on thanksgiving but hey it's welcome! Happy Halloween to you!
10/8/2007 c7 34Arienhod
I love it!

May I sugest a little jelousy from Van towards Allen. After all having his own son liking someone else can hurt a bit. But liking a man that almost took away Hitomi from him got to hurt a lot.
9/7/2007 c6 7JazzNProwl's sparklingAriaFyre
YAY!
8/20/2007 c6 13serenityrain2233
good very good bye now...
8/19/2007 c6 4Inda
Keep it coming! Boy Van has his work cut out for him.
8/19/2007 c6 6Ayr
o...gd chapter, im looking forward to readig more, especial soem v&h romance!

Mel

xox
8/19/2007 c6 sousie
poor van

plz update soon
8/19/2007 c6 34Arienhod
Well, five real old kids don't talk like that.

But with this two everything is possible considering who their parents are.

Honestly I never imagined children of the dragon and the seeres to be normal kids... that whould be weird.
8/19/2007 c5 6Ayr
haha, i love it! lol
8/17/2007 c5 Tzarista
great chapter

can't wait for more
8/17/2007 c5 Inda
OH! he's surprised! wish there was more! keep it coming!
8/17/2007 c5 13serenityrain2233
that was cute i cant wait to read more please up date soon bye now...
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