
6/4/2007 c1
5Lyra the Heretic
I like the first half... it's like... You get to 'Maddy Fenton' and it's totally not what it looked like. Fun. ^-^

I like the first half... it's like... You get to 'Maddy Fenton' and it's totally not what it looked like. Fun. ^-^
6/2/2007 c1 takido0666
CUTE
I love how you had the beginning so mysterious and such, and then had it go back to semi-normal at the end. And I like the spin you put on Sam-Danny actions, or at least the POV of it all...
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
CUTE
I love how you had the beginning so mysterious and such, and then had it go back to semi-normal at the end. And I like the spin you put on Sam-Danny actions, or at least the POV of it all...
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK