for Precious and Fragile Things9/25/2008 c6 
1sierra's scarlet
Wow. You don't go for the easy writes do you? This piece really makes me contemplate the sense of touch and how much I use it (not in the dirty way mind), but just how hard it must be to feel nothing at all. You do a great job of creating the reality of a hopeless mindset. Are you close to someone who is partially paralyzed? This is certainly good enough to seem that way.
1sierra's scarletWow. You don't go for the easy writes do you? This piece really makes me contemplate the sense of touch and how much I use it (not in the dirty way mind), but just how hard it must be to feel nothing at all. You do a great job of creating the reality of a hopeless mindset. Are you close to someone who is partially paralyzed? This is certainly good enough to seem that way.
6/10/2007 c6 Talon
I loved this story...I had been wondering if anyone did a 'sirius back through the veil' thing and I was happy to come across this one. While of course I love fairy tale endings (sirius walking!) I thought this was very believable and cool ending and I was so happy they finally were on the normal track again by the end. Great job!
I loved this story...I had been wondering if anyone did a 'sirius back through the veil' thing and I was happy to come across this one. While of course I love fairy tale endings (sirius walking!) I thought this was very believable and cool ending and I was so happy they finally were on the normal track again by the end. Great job!
6/9/2007 c6 Illyra
Hey! I´m so happy that you posted it on I´ve read it on SBRL last year and I liked it a lot! It´s really good, especially Remus´ reaction. That he´s just happy to have him back. Sirius´problems are well written, too. His feelings of uselessnes, his drinking problems, etc. It´s a perfect mixture of humour (Tonks first assault), drama and a happy end. (I love happy ends.)
Hey! I´m so happy that you posted it on I´ve read it on SBRL last year and I liked it a lot! It´s really good, especially Remus´ reaction. That he´s just happy to have him back. Sirius´problems are well written, too. His feelings of uselessnes, his drinking problems, etc. It´s a perfect mixture of humour (Tonks first assault), drama and a happy end. (I love happy ends.)
6/5/2007 c1 firesnake or snakelights
This story is excellent!
May I reccomend you get a livejournal and put it at
community.
I think you'll find them being more receptive to such a peice.
This story is excellent!
May I reccomend you get a livejournal and put it at
community.
I think you'll find them being more receptive to such a peice.
6/3/2007 c6 13rekahneko
Yea!
Sirius has finally accepted his life and he and Remus can get back to being all cute and happy.
Whew!
I love how Harry is able to be with them (grr Mrs. Weasley) and mediate, encourage, help out, and butt out when the occassion calls for it.
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13rekahnekoYea!
Sirius has finally accepted his life and he and Remus can get back to being all cute and happy.
Whew!
I love how Harry is able to be with them (grr Mrs. Weasley) and mediate, encourage, help out, and butt out when the occassion calls for it.
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6/3/2007 c4 rekahneko
I like how you use Kingsley and Tonks, showing both positive and negative relationships that Remus has other than with Sirius. Too often I read something where the only person Remus has is Sirius. In this case, he has chosen Sirius, not just that he is the only person around.
I like how you use Kingsley and Tonks, showing both positive and negative relationships that Remus has other than with Sirius. Too often I read something where the only person Remus has is Sirius. In this case, he has chosen Sirius, not just that he is the only person around.
6/3/2007 c3 rekahneko
A very good job on showing Sirius' frustration with events and how he feels so powerless about everything going on around him.
Very emotional!
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A very good job on showing Sirius' frustration with events and how he feels so powerless about everything going on around him.
Very emotional!
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