for The God of the Sun8/1/2022 c12 Jasmine2018
Are you going to do a sequel to this story?
Are you going to do a sequel to this story?
7/25/2020 c1 Yikes
After reading some good fanfiction this just a big glass of yikes. The jokes are genuinely awful and the writing is piss poor. But there are hints of something better. Just hints
After reading some good fanfiction this just a big glass of yikes. The jokes are genuinely awful and the writing is piss poor. But there are hints of something better. Just hints
11/13/2018 c3 Me
What the hell is “yer” supposed to be? Try using real words! Also, run this thing through a word processor and spellcheck before posting – it’s riddled with grammatical errors!
What the hell is “yer” supposed to be? Try using real words! Also, run this thing through a word processor and spellcheck before posting – it’s riddled with grammatical errors!
9/2/2018 c6 Critical2023
tried to read but it is like written by a first grader. see the dog, see the dog run and now see the dog s(h)it.
tried to read but it is like written by a first grader. see the dog, see the dog run and now see the dog s(h)it.
5/15/2014 c12 victoria
Brilliant, I loved this.
Brilliant, I loved this.
4/29/2013 c12 Doom
quit in the middle did ya?
quit in the middle did ya?
6/14/2010 c1 
4Valkyrie Raylene
Hey SlytheringRules
I loved your story! Are you planning on continuing? I would definitely read it if you did. You're an awesome writer and I hope you write more
Luv ValkyrieRaylene
4Valkyrie RayleneHey SlytheringRules
I loved your story! Are you planning on continuing? I would definitely read it if you did. You're an awesome writer and I hope you write more
Luv ValkyrieRaylene
5/18/2010 c12 Isabelle
I liked the story, very much so. But I was disappointed it finished so soon : Voldemort isn't really dead, where did Beatrix go ? She was battling Dumbeldore and then He and Harry went. How are the others ? What will Harry learn ? Will he learn and then find the Hocruxes, or is it somethimg else in this story ? Will Seth just give up ? In MY view, the story isn't finished, there is too many unanswered questions.
I liked the story, very much so. But I was disappointed it finished so soon : Voldemort isn't really dead, where did Beatrix go ? She was battling Dumbeldore and then He and Harry went. How are the others ? What will Harry learn ? Will he learn and then find the Hocruxes, or is it somethimg else in this story ? Will Seth just give up ? In MY view, the story isn't finished, there is too many unanswered questions.