for True Love7/2/2015 c1 like a boss
WTF WAS THAT, don't you think that was a little sudden , the story was really good but still really .
WTF WAS THAT, don't you think that was a little sudden , the story was really good but still really .
4/10/2009 c1 
6Vospader21
Well there could have been more plot, but the lemon was good enough to read the other 2 stories.
6Vospader21Well there could have been more plot, but the lemon was good enough to read the other 2 stories.
5/13/2008 c1 2Sacred Beast117
okay...um...yea BEST LEMON EVER
you need to write a full chapter story please it would be soo goo u did suck an awesome job
and like i said before BEST LEMON EVER
2Sacred Beast117okay...um...yea BEST LEMON EVER
you need to write a full chapter story please it would be soo goo u did suck an awesome job
and like i said before BEST LEMON EVER
2/8/2008 c1 23blackdeathmessenger
not bad.sorry it took me so long to finally start reading these,but other things kept distracting me.
23blackdeathmessengernot bad.sorry it took me so long to finally start reading these,but other things kept distracting me.
1/20/2008 c1 3Yondaime-Sensei
Interesting Lemon. Definitely a good start for your first fic.
One thing I have to point out though: Make sure you get punctuation in. Sometimes the sentences got a little run together.
Other than that, good work :)
3Yondaime-SenseiInteresting Lemon. Definitely a good start for your first fic.
One thing I have to point out though: Make sure you get punctuation in. Sometimes the sentences got a little run together.
Other than that, good work :)
9/28/2007 c1 77Winter-Rae
Now that was a hot one shot!
Gotta love those!
You write very well, nice and too the point. I like that!
I'm off to read the other two now!
Nice work!
Cheers!
Winter-Rae xoxo
77Winter-RaeNow that was a hot one shot!
Gotta love those!
You write very well, nice and too the point. I like that!
I'm off to read the other two now!
Nice work!
Cheers!
Winter-Rae xoxo
6/10/2007 c1 numba1gaarafan
omg naruto and sakura a dream come come true for him anyway.oh this story rox
omg naruto and sakura a dream come come true for him anyway.oh this story rox
6/5/2007 c1 13narusakufan1985
This is a cute story. Please make some more. Naruto and Sakura forever.
13narusakufan1985This is a cute story. Please make some more. Naruto and Sakura forever.
6/4/2007 c1 5bluebuff
smut without plot?
i'd advise that there be at least some coherent ... point as to where this is supposed to be going.
Sure, there are little fics that don't really have a point, but they look a lot more interesting with one than without
There can always an alternate version rewrite right?
5bluebuffsmut without plot?
i'd advise that there be at least some coherent ... point as to where this is supposed to be going.
Sure, there are little fics that don't really have a point, but they look a lot more interesting with one than without
There can always an alternate version rewrite right?