for Send Her My Love2/18/2011 c5 ProSemiticNazi
Good story except the part about him not touching his knives. Nny NOT killing people is ridiculous. That's one of the things we love about him. Also, later issues show him still murdering people so he should still use his knives. Nice plot though.
Good story except the part about him not touching his knives. Nny NOT killing people is ridiculous. That's one of the things we love about him. Also, later issues show him still murdering people so he should still use his knives. Nice plot though.
5/5/2010 c1 
1Raven Samantha Byron
Chapter 2. Chapter 2. please write more I want to find out what happens...
1Raven Samantha ByronChapter 2. Chapter 2. please write more I want to find out what happens...
1/30/2008 c6 122otherrealmwriter
A very sweet way to end a brutal fic in a way. I found it to be very nice.
122otherrealmwriterA very sweet way to end a brutal fic in a way. I found it to be very nice.
1/30/2008 c4 otherrealmwriter
This is interesting I want to see how this goes I can see a little NnyxDevi thing
This is interesting I want to see how this goes I can see a little NnyxDevi thing
1/30/2008 c2 otherrealmwriter
Wow. I can see somethig happening here. Sounds very interesting. I like this one.
Wow. I can see somethig happening here. Sounds very interesting. I like this one.
6/8/2007 c2 119Desdemona Kakalose
i think devi's personality may have been glossed over, but for the sake of enjoyment, i really don't care. keep writting.
119Desdemona Kakalosei think devi's personality may have been glossed over, but for the sake of enjoyment, i really don't care. keep writting.
6/7/2007 c1 5Megga B
Pretty good, although some of it was a little difficult to understand, for lack of wordage being there. Looks like we have another unfortunant victom of the netsitter. Don't worry, I was subjected to the damn thing for quite a long time untill it began to eat at my computer and destroy it. Then my mother very thankfully uninstalled and all was well.
I have to say, there's really no way to get around that blasted thing. The only thing you can do is submit your work from some other location or send it to somone in an e-mail so that they can submit it for you. Me and my friend Josh used to do that with my fics.
Anyway, hope I helped a little bit. And the fic itself was very well written, if not a tad bit short. Keep going!
5Megga BPretty good, although some of it was a little difficult to understand, for lack of wordage being there. Looks like we have another unfortunant victom of the netsitter. Don't worry, I was subjected to the damn thing for quite a long time untill it began to eat at my computer and destroy it. Then my mother very thankfully uninstalled and all was well.
I have to say, there's really no way to get around that blasted thing. The only thing you can do is submit your work from some other location or send it to somone in an e-mail so that they can submit it for you. Me and my friend Josh used to do that with my fics.
Anyway, hope I helped a little bit. And the fic itself was very well written, if not a tad bit short. Keep going!