for A Surprise At The Burrow7/19/2007 c1 
9Eat a Taco
DEAR STEAMROSE'S FRIEND:
very nice last line. and being a guitarist myself i am in love with the fact that you wrote him as a good guitar player. it was very well written, although i didn't exactly...like it. your style's nice but i think the entire plot of it was out of cannon. does this happen before or after the Hospital Scene? (YES IT DOES DESERVE CAPS) and i don't think Remus would purpose after he rowed with her about not loving her.
but w/e, your fic.
GOODBYE SR'S FRIEND!
~EP
9Eat a TacoDEAR STEAMROSE'S FRIEND:
very nice last line. and being a guitarist myself i am in love with the fact that you wrote him as a good guitar player. it was very well written, although i didn't exactly...like it. your style's nice but i think the entire plot of it was out of cannon. does this happen before or after the Hospital Scene? (YES IT DOES DESERVE CAPS) and i don't think Remus would purpose after he rowed with her about not loving her.
but w/e, your fic.
GOODBYE SR'S FRIEND!
~EP