
6/7/2007 c1
10PatriciaS
Interesting idea and nicely written can imagine those two (or three) slugging it out ... words and possibly fists. Looking forward to the next one.

Interesting idea and nicely written can imagine those two (or three) slugging it out ... words and possibly fists. Looking forward to the next one.
6/7/2007 c1
70ScruffyLovin
Interesting start. This is definitely different from any "Abyss" tags I've read so far, and I'm liking it. :) Eager for the next chapter.

Interesting start. This is definitely different from any "Abyss" tags I've read so far, and I'm liking it. :) Eager for the next chapter.
6/7/2007 c1
5Neiths Arrow
Oh! Another fic by you. It's already starting out to be a good one. Can't wait to see what happens next. Loved the open door and Jacob's interpretation. I wouldn't have 'gotten' it.

Oh! Another fic by you. It's already starting out to be a good one. Can't wait to see what happens next. Loved the open door and Jacob's interpretation. I wouldn't have 'gotten' it.
6/7/2007 c1 Ilovesg1
Outstanding beginning. I was so excited when I saw you had posted a new story. I love what you do with the Jacob/Jack relationship. It is so dynamic. I howled at the 'intravenous' remark about the milk. I cannot wait for the update.
Outstanding beginning. I was so excited when I saw you had posted a new story. I love what you do with the Jacob/Jack relationship. It is so dynamic. I howled at the 'intravenous' remark about the milk. I cannot wait for the update.