for The meteors that descended on the cosmic era3/19/2009 c17 
3General MG
I read the story and I liked it but when are you introduce Lady Une in her most devious manner towards her enemies? I hoped that two years is still enough for you start the next chapter. As for the previous draft version, I liked Heero being the long lost big brother to Lacus Clyne and Relena as mobile suit pilot to the Heero's first mobile suit, Wing Gundam.
3General MGI read the story and I liked it but when are you introduce Lady Une in her most devious manner towards her enemies? I hoped that two years is still enough for you start the next chapter. As for the previous draft version, I liked Heero being the long lost big brother to Lacus Clyne and Relena as mobile suit pilot to the Heero's first mobile suit, Wing Gundam.
7/23/2008 c17 14nequam-tenshi
Your grandmother, will be in a better place-it seems that your grandmother suffered enough: not being able to see her family members much, staying a bed mostly of the time, etc. I know it's lonely that someone is passing away but every dark moment has even the smallest light-so don't be sad that your grandmother is passing away; it's the unavoidable truth about life and she will still watch over you-spiritual that is.
I might be a stranger to you but as a person, everyone faces death in life. I pray that it won't be too hard on you.
14nequam-tenshiYour grandmother, will be in a better place-it seems that your grandmother suffered enough: not being able to see her family members much, staying a bed mostly of the time, etc. I know it's lonely that someone is passing away but every dark moment has even the smallest light-so don't be sad that your grandmother is passing away; it's the unavoidable truth about life and she will still watch over you-spiritual that is.
I might be a stranger to you but as a person, everyone faces death in life. I pray that it won't be too hard on you.
5/3/2008 c16 14nequam-tenshi
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
And thank you for reviewing Dead, no Alive and the new chapter is posted-sorry if it is short. :d
14nequam-tenshiUPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
And thank you for reviewing Dead, no Alive and the new chapter is posted-sorry if it is short. :d
4/20/2008 c16 45Dante 101
I've noticed that they've heasted when they said Yzak's name, I mean what the heck is that about, I mean do they know him or something?
What the * do they mean about the kid with blue eyes and pink hair?
45Dante 101I've noticed that they've heasted when they said Yzak's name, I mean what the heck is that about, I mean do they know him or something?
What the * do they mean about the kid with blue eyes and pink hair?
4/20/2008 c16 16animefan29
Not bad, good chapter plot wise. But there are some problems. First you seem a little redundant in your writing, sometimes having one character repeat what another said, or saying/writing things that aren't really needed. Second is how I counted at least six times you used an inappropiate word. Such as putting an 'our' when it should be 'or'. There was also, I feel, some missing commas and one question mark.
Finally why do you keep changing the pairings?
16animefan29Not bad, good chapter plot wise. But there are some problems. First you seem a little redundant in your writing, sometimes having one character repeat what another said, or saying/writing things that aren't really needed. Second is how I counted at least six times you used an inappropiate word. Such as putting an 'our' when it should be 'or'. There was also, I feel, some missing commas and one question mark.
Finally why do you keep changing the pairings?
4/8/2008 c13 14nequam-tenshi
Great job and I am glad that someone can use Meer in a good way.
I'm a Meer fan.
Please tell me she will end up will Athrun or one of the GW boys!
I am new and I was wondering if you could read my gundam story called Dead, no Alive.
14nequam-tenshiGreat job and I am glad that someone can use Meer in a good way.
I'm a Meer fan.
Please tell me she will end up will Athrun or one of the GW boys!
I am new and I was wondering if you could read my gundam story called Dead, no Alive.
3/24/2008 c15 45Dante 101
Which of the GAT series is Zechs going to fight in the next chapter? please tell please.
Will Zechs acutally kill one of them?
45Dante 101Which of the GAT series is Zechs going to fight in the next chapter? please tell please.
Will Zechs acutally kill one of them?
3/24/2008 c13 Dante 101
I've noticed that Gundam Seed is ahead of Gundam Wing. Are you intending to finsh Gundam Seed before Gundam wing?
I've noticed that Gundam Seed is ahead of Gundam Wing. Are you intending to finsh Gundam Seed before Gundam wing?