for Castel Ho!10/15/2007 c1 
14Eldonyx
Good beginning, but... do you know what is a comma? Because I couldn't find a single one in the entire chapter.
14EldonyxGood beginning, but... do you know what is a comma? Because I couldn't find a single one in the entire chapter.
6/6/2007 c1 14Omnipotent One Envy
Hey! I'm having an online party, and you've been invited because your stories are totally awesome! Make some new internet freinds and have some fun! Food and Candy, Dancing and music! And of course, Spin The Bottle and Truth-Or-Dare! Perfect for if you're bored! Talk about your favorite show and books, and find people with similar interests! The doors are now open! Just come to my forum labeled "FanFic Party!" See you there!
Sincerely,
Your Hostress,
Kimi Kurasaki
14Omnipotent One EnvyHey! I'm having an online party, and you've been invited because your stories are totally awesome! Make some new internet freinds and have some fun! Food and Candy, Dancing and music! And of course, Spin The Bottle and Truth-Or-Dare! Perfect for if you're bored! Talk about your favorite show and books, and find people with similar interests! The doors are now open! Just come to my forum labeled "FanFic Party!" See you there!
Sincerely,
Your Hostress,
Kimi Kurasaki