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2/2/2008 c4 passer-by
wahahahah! so funny! I love your style of writing. Most stories that are written based on another show/comic/story are usually not written very well. But I absolutely love yours! It's written very descriptively and very realisticly. It's easy to picture in the reader's mind, not because it follows the same plotline but because of the clearity and emotions of the different characters. (: I love shiho-yzak's pairing! dearka-mirillia's puppylove (on dearka's side) is so cute! And woohoo for cagalli-athrun!
2/2/2008 c4 6flanauCaramel
I wonder what Yzak Joule is doing there... Maybe Athrun convinced him to employ her? Haha, i'm just trying to guess! Anyway, I'm really loving your fic!The storyline is not like My Girl's anymore... I had thought you'd make Kira part of the love triangle but I'm happy you chose Shinn instead :) Update again, I can't wait to read the rest! Oh and thanks for your support! You rock :D
2/2/2008 c4 CagalliRules
Hey! Thanks for your chapt! :) Heehee! Update!
1/30/2008 c3 12Prince-in-Disguise
Haha! Poor Cagalli sure goes through a lot of trauma. Athrun's so sneaky for not telling her what's really going on!

Very cute! I like this story!
1/24/2008 c1 impatient.reader
can't wait. update!
1/20/2008 c3 38Freyris
LOL nice chappie! I just cant wait to see if Athruns gonna put here in the same company as he is.. wahah. Great work! Love it! update soon ne?
1/18/2008 c3 eclaire
it's me. since i have spare time, i'm gonna review your story as promised and since you've been very frank in reviewing my stories, i'm gonna do the same so...here goes... the first two chapters were really good. i mean you've got my interest at that point, but well...hm...i'm kind of expecting a bit more action between the characters. and also a bit more spark in AC moments will do the trick hehe...so keep those ideas coming. good luck

friendly yours (hehe),

your friend...(obvious nman kung cnu noh)
1/13/2008 c3 15Laserworm
Cool story, I can't wait to find out what Cagalli's going to do when she finds out the truth. xD

Update soon.
1/13/2008 c3 3WindAssasin
Oh, that's nice. Update soon! I want to know what's next
1/12/2008 c3 5Milleniumgirlie
Aw... poor Kira! hehehehe anywayz NEXT CHAP PLEASE!
1/11/2008 c3 2GizzyBlues
update again!
1/11/2008 c3 8Milisante
Ha! Great Chapter! I like it=)

Well, I adore Yzak and his behaviour!^^ ~hehehe~

Shiho is adorable too^^

Lacus and Kira, interesting version^_^ Nice)

And the next personage to introduce? I wonder!^^ Shinn, ka?=)

~miu~
1/11/2008 c3 2Mage666
Oh I can't wait to see this YxS pairing! And poor Kira, he seemed really sad. Why don't you make Cagalli and Kira go out to that concert thing so that the tickets are not wasted? Just an idea, but your story, Your rules! Update soon! Mage6 :D
1/11/2008 c3 CagalliRules
Hey! Thanks! Haahaa! Update! Nice chappie! :)
1/11/2008 c3 1Glorious Rubbish
Lol! haha Harro,Harro I hope for you ,you have a brighter vocabulary then the actual Harro.

Otherwise the whole story would be "Lacus, Athrun, Harro ,Harro..Etc *shudders* This chapter is promising for more!

How will Cags react when she knows of Athrun knowing Lacus (lol what a weird sentence XD) and Yzak lolz he's such a grumpy guy ne?
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