for Secret Park12/29/2008 c2 TOHRU HONDA
If it is not oo much trouble would you mind putting in a part where Tohru-san meets one of the kids in another place besides the park and either Kyo-kun would be with her or not which I leave that to your choice, but if you can't decide you can do it without him . Hopefully that will help you. Please update soon!
If it is not oo much trouble would you mind putting in a part where Tohru-san meets one of the kids in another place besides the park and either Kyo-kun would be with her or not which I leave that to your choice, but if you can't decide you can do it without him . Hopefully that will help you. Please update soon!
8/25/2007 c2 loretta537
hi what a good story. I think the next chapter should be from yuki's point of view. how about torhu has been sneaking out to watch kyo play with the kids and one day yuki follows her?
hi what a good story. I think the next chapter should be from yuki's point of view. how about torhu has been sneaking out to watch kyo play with the kids and one day yuki follows her?
8/3/2007 c2 
1RogueHoney
i thought this was adorable. i'd like to see tohru confront kyo on having seen him with the kids. if you're still accepting suggestions.
1RogueHoneyi thought this was adorable. i'd like to see tohru confront kyo on having seen him with the kids. if you're still accepting suggestions.
8/1/2007 c2 2Mistress Kisa
ideas for your story: make Kyo react really odly to Tohru kissing his check.
Make Yuki find out
Have Yuki angry at Kyo for Tohrus attention.
2Mistress Kisaideas for your story: make Kyo react really odly to Tohru kissing his check.
Make Yuki find out
Have Yuki angry at Kyo for Tohrus attention.
8/1/2007 c2 hannah
i loved your story, secret park, i think that yuki should find out, and not really beleive it. it would be very funny to see yuki's reaction. maybe next time, tohru could come with kyo? this is my first time reveiwing, and i hope it isn't to bad.
i loved your story, secret park, i think that yuki should find out, and not really beleive it. it would be very funny to see yuki's reaction. maybe next time, tohru could come with kyo? this is my first time reveiwing, and i hope it isn't to bad.
7/30/2007 c2 13Otaku-Rehab
i think the next chapter should B from kyo's POV starting from tohru's kiss on the cheek.
~jax
13Otaku-Rehabi think the next chapter should B from kyo's POV starting from tohru's kiss on the cheek.
~jax
6/26/2007 c1 Born 13th month 32nd day
THAT... IS... THE... MOST... ADORABLE... THING... I'VE... EVER... READ.
It was incredible. What else can I freaking say? IT WAS AMMAZZING! Actually, I hope you write a sequel... I want to see what happens when Kyo finds out Tohru followed him!
THAT... IS... THE... MOST... ADORABLE... THING... I'VE... EVER... READ.
It was incredible. What else can I freaking say? IT WAS AMMAZZING! Actually, I hope you write a sequel... I want to see what happens when Kyo finds out Tohru followed him!
6/24/2007 c1 1ninja princess kimiko
Awh, that was so sweet. Yeah, Kyo seems like a really nice person on the inside, even though he hides it.
1ninja princess kimikoAwh, that was so sweet. Yeah, Kyo seems like a really nice person on the inside, even though he hides it.
6/21/2007 c1 8Yori Hayashi
That was so cute! ^^ Love, love, love the end! I'm putting this on my favorites!
-Yori Hayashi
8Yori HayashiThat was so cute! ^^ Love, love, love the end! I'm putting this on my favorites!
-Yori Hayashi
6/12/2007 c1 Dialott
aw...that was so cute...please make more chapters! i realy want to know wat happends next! if you do deside to continue, please let me know!
aw...that was so cute...please make more chapters! i realy want to know wat happends next! if you do deside to continue, please let me know!
6/11/2007 c1 230 Seconds to YOUR MOM
Aww.
I couldn't help but smile when reading this.
It was so cute.
And yes, Kyo was...very OCC.
He likes kids?
Haha, anyways, really cute.
230 Seconds to YOUR MOMAww.
I couldn't help but smile when reading this.
It was so cute.
And yes, Kyo was...very OCC.
He likes kids?
Haha, anyways, really cute.