
12/13/2012 c5
4SenaAllMine3120
Gasp! such a great story needs to be continued! i hope you update soon!

Gasp! such a great story needs to be continued! i hope you update soon!
9/2/2012 c5
11diggydawg
Ooh, I loved this you know? It's so cool! I like the idea, I haven't read one this like before. I like how it all ties together. Hmm. I wonder if Kurama or Hiei took her? Either way, I like it! Please keep going! :)

Ooh, I loved this you know? It's so cool! I like the idea, I haven't read one this like before. I like how it all ties together. Hmm. I wonder if Kurama or Hiei took her? Either way, I like it! Please keep going! :)
12/28/2007 c5
4Halogirl3000
Wow! Great story! I love the relation between Kurama and Hikari(who admittedly is a really cute original character!)The whole story so far is great, it's hard to make the story from the begining of the anime/manga, but you are doing an excellent job of following the original plot, but making it with your own twist! Can't wait to read the next part!

Wow! Great story! I love the relation between Kurama and Hikari(who admittedly is a really cute original character!)The whole story so far is great, it's hard to make the story from the begining of the anime/manga, but you are doing an excellent job of following the original plot, but making it with your own twist! Can't wait to read the next part!
11/29/2007 c5
14Hikari-Kayko
more... pleaz? i like your oc and i'd like to see more of her... and the romance part with hiei to of course. lol ^_^
~HIKARi

more... pleaz? i like your oc and i'd like to see more of her... and the romance part with hiei to of course. lol ^_^
~HIKARi
10/13/2007 c5 alyssa
More Plz! i really like this story. It's awesome. PLZ-!
More Plz! i really like this story. It's awesome. PLZ-!
7/28/2007 c4
11Eskimo-Otter
this is a great story so far! although i'm a bit confused as to how old Hikari is? Cuz in the first chapter it said she was 12 going on 15? oh well keep writing ^_^

this is a great story so far! although i'm a bit confused as to how old Hikari is? Cuz in the first chapter it said she was 12 going on 15? oh well keep writing ^_^
7/19/2007 c4
1hopelessly bored and random
LOL, Mt. Kurama? How did it look like? Was it red? :D
Update!w

LOL, Mt. Kurama? How did it look like? Was it red? :D
Update!w