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6/19/2007 c6 7Heisui
PURE GENIUS. XD

-'Sui-
6/19/2007 c6 1Fanficier
Shweet! Nice chapters so far, it's going along really well!
6/19/2007 c6 3Chiyanaski
I totally luv it! ^^

GASP! My dad doesn't love my mom!

I luv these...little mini chapter like thingies...

Can't wait 'till you write more...

~MithosxGenis 4EVER!~
6/19/2007 c6 1Nasusi
That was a funny chapter! I think Lloyd should learn Judgement! He's an angel in the end, isn't he? And he should blowYuan up!

And...he had nightmares from that day?

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA...FUNNY!

Keep on writing,'kay?
6/19/2007 c5 Nasusi
Hey, that was a nice chapter! And I'm really surprized that Raine is finally doing the healing!

And Kratos died?

Ah!

I'm glad he's alive again!
6/19/2007 c6 Wyrvvn
OMG

I LOL'D

SO HARD

'GASP! MY DAD DOESN'T LOVE MY MOM!'

endless entertainment. AND YET I WANT MOAR.
6/18/2007 c4 Bebbo
I hope you update soon, I really enjoyed how you did Raine's perspective.
6/17/2007 c4 7Heisui
Ouuh! Awesomeness!~

It was short, but really well-written.

Keep writing~

-'Sui-
6/16/2007 c4 3Chiyanaski
WOW~!

Awesome story! ^^

Totally luv it!

Can't wait till the next chappie~! ^_~

~MithosxGenis 4EVER!~
6/16/2007 c4 M
Yeah, you update much faster than I ever do.
6/16/2007 c4 5JoanNeko13
I cant believe there are 4 chapters up already and I'm reviewing now...and it's Kraine...am I dying...?

Oh well...all that aside. I am loving this. I hate incest! But this was funny! Besides Lloyd doesn't know Kratos is his daddy...so it doesn't count that much.

Anyways the story is awesome! Please update soon!
6/16/2007 c1 1Fanficier
Woah! Sweet Kraine Fan fic! Usually there aren't that many like this out here, update soon!
6/16/2007 c4 45blooming Ednae
AH CLIFF HANGER! I LOVE THIS STORY!

i've read other rainexkratos stories, but this is my fav., and i am not lying!

wow, storyline is so...just everywhere O_O haha

just...ah, cant even explain in words, i really like this story!

...but...raine didnt-? right? at the end? of this chap?

ahh...
6/15/2007 c4 2RedAnko
Yeah, very interesting. ...*cocks head to side confusedly* I thought I reviewed this already... Meh, whatever. I like the approach you've taken to this story, even if I'm not a big Kratos/Lloyd fan either. I like the opening to this chap as well, with the dictionary thing. It's a nice touch and it fits with Raine's personality quite well. But nice job, update soon!

~Red
6/15/2007 c4 Wyrvvn
WHY DO I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!

Hell, I forgot what like, 80% of what the story was about already. 3

I miss the onesided LoydxKratos already. ;-;
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