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6/15/2007 c4 4The Amazing Chris
I really liked the opening part... With the dictionary. It's not something many authors realize, but it fits Raine's character perfectly. And, the context was fantastic. Despite the fact that it was a little short, I really enjoyed this chapter. Perhaps the most of all of them. Keep up the fantastic work!

~The Amazing Chris
6/15/2007 c4 7ChristalSteele
Very nice this was a great job. It was nice to see the battle from Raine's point of view. I kind of wonder what Kratos's thoughts are having to go for Raine. And yes you do update fast which is very nice. So hope you can keep it up.
6/15/2007 c3 ChristalSteele
Very nice chapter like how it only slightly goes Kratos/Raine and not full force. It's very wonderfully done.
6/15/2007 c2 ChristalSteele
*Shivers* Can't understand people who like Kratos/Lloyd as a couple. blah. Any way an interesting chapter and well done with the last bit.
6/15/2007 c4 1Nasusi
So Kratos is the traitor now!

It must be hard to write from Raine's part! But make the next chpter longer!
6/14/2007 c3 7Dragnotchi
I really like where this story's going so far - the characters are portrayed well and your writing style brings everyone through the chapters well. I can't wait to see what happens next; I'm sure it will be just as good as everything else.
6/14/2007 c3 4The Amazing Chris
Darkness is the worst place to be alone...

Keep up the fantastic work.

~The Amazing Chris
6/14/2007 c3 26Red and Gold Phoenix
AWW! Only two! What! This story kicks BUTT! I am a major Kratos and Raine fan so I was so excited when I saw this! Okay, this story is awsome, I really like the way you write, it's very good and everyone is in character! YEY! Update! Please! The whole Lloyd and Kratos thing was weird... but this is FF after all! Anyway, keep up the good work and awsome Kratos and Raine love! Update ASAP! Please!

Red and Gold Phoenix
6/14/2007 c3 6Zoray Zorial
Well, let me start with an apology for contributing to those hits without reviewing.

So here's a review! I like it so far. No real complaints...The healing bit is an interesting approach to the Kraine relationship. Frankly, I'm suprised you're the first one to write about it! Something they share, and building on it...neat!

It always annoyed me in the game that Raine would either focus on one person, or herself. Everyone else was left to Kratos. Speaking of that, it seems to suggest a scenario for the next chapter. Perhaps Raine will begin to heal only herself...or something like that.

Keep it up!

Ja ne,

~Zoray Zorial

P.S. - I agree with The Amazing Chris
6/14/2007 c3 1Nasusi
DO NOT CRY! I ALREADY REVIEWED FOR THE CHAPTER 2!

Is this going to be a Kraine-story? I'm free for all pairing!

Have you seen "ToS- The animation" yet? You should, if you didn't, it's funny, even if Kratos says only one sentence...
6/14/2007 c2 Nasusi
I think that Kratos should thing, too! With this sexy voice...

Ehem, anyway, I'm really like that father-son-stuff! But I'm glad that Lloyd didn't kiss Kratos...

But I still liked it!
6/13/2007 c2 4The Amazing Chris
*smacks head*

*smacks head harder*

That was humor? Whoa...

WELL!

Not being the biggest LloydxKratos fan in the world...

I shall keep my comments to myself.

Keep going though, I really like your writing style.

~The Amazing Chris
6/13/2007 c1 The Amazing Chris
Typical Raine stubbornness.

I liked it...
6/13/2007 c2 beware irregular nouns
This is a damn fine story. There's only one point I've got to make - does the Kratos/Lloyd have to end here? Don't get me wrong, I'm all in favour of the proposed Kratos/Raine, but a good-quality one-sided Kratos/Lloyd is a rare and wondrous thing.
6/12/2007 c1 11Lesser Master
I rather enjoyed this fanfic, it's also my first TOS fanfic I've ever read
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