FanFiction.Net
Just In
Community
Forum
V
More
for One O One

6/2/2017 c1 Fugacity
Deliciously funny and cute.
2/29/2008 c1 becca
aw...
12/6/2007 c1 lucy2525
AW
10/27/2007 c1 1K59
Cute
8/25/2007 c1 4bigboy16
The fic made my eyes sore...Please fix up the grammar, I stopped reading halfway through because I couldn't understand 75% of what I was reading. Also, you have some wrong info in the fic too, most noticably the "Alohamora" thing. I hope you take my criticism to heart and don't take it as "flaming".
7/2/2007 c1 fairychick93
aaww! I love the last bit!
6/27/2007 c1 Kristen
Holy cow! That was SO cute. Brilliant! I hope you decide to carry that story line on!
6/22/2007 c1 Flightlessfairy
That was really cute! I loved the number 101. Great story! i MAY have to read Flowers in her hair...tee-hee
6/21/2007 c1 1vowtoslash
A cute idea. I enjoyed it. Even if het isn't my thing. But I did notice one thing that really made me nervous.

"Ginny watched her pack her books in to her trunk and change in to her night clothes. She took out her tooth brush and making sure that she locked the trunk again with ‘alohamora’ she turned back to Ginny."

"Alohamora" *opens* locked objects. It wouldn't have locked Hermione's trunk as you said here.

A very cute story none-the-less!
6/16/2007 c1 5the-boy-who-loved
brillo, loved it
6/14/2007 c1 mrsbrandonflowers
aw this is so cute. seriously. especially the last line " reason one hundred and one...he loves me" aw!
6/13/2007 c1 2ballerinadoll9
aw!
6/13/2007 c1 13quidditch7
Ah this one-shot COMPLETELY made my day! It was a very clever idea (loved the list of 101 things) and really well written. I was laughing throughout the whole thing...especially when Ginny was useing her hands to act out a scene between Ron and Hermione. haha.

Definitely the best part of this one-shot though was the last line! Ah..how darling! That made my eyes water a tiny bit. I absoulutly love Ginny and Harry together..and your stories about them make me love that ship even more. Just the way that Harry says they will be together some day and he holds her hand and such..and yes...again..the last line! ahh..best line ever. haha.

This was a really witty fic...the dialogue was amazing! I'm so glad you posted it. You will probably get a million reviews haha.

huge fan!

-quidditch7
6/12/2007 c1 5autumn145
A little bit of constructive critisism:

You're grammers a bit off, and it was sometimes hard to follow who was saying what, but besides that it was a really cute story. I enjoyed reading it...it was something I could totally see Ginny doing, lol.

Twitter . Help . Sign Up . Cookies . Privacy . Terms of Service