
12/8/2011 c14
3edwardfiend
This is amazing. I really wasn't sure about it at first and I'd tried to read it before and failed,mostly because it wasn't really what I was looking for at the time, but I kept coming across it and finally decided to give it a read. I am so glad I did! This is really well written and was really addictive. I couldn't stop reading. One of the best fics I have ever read. :)

This is amazing. I really wasn't sure about it at first and I'd tried to read it before and failed,mostly because it wasn't really what I was looking for at the time, but I kept coming across it and finally decided to give it a read. I am so glad I did! This is really well written and was really addictive. I couldn't stop reading. One of the best fics I have ever read. :)
9/22/2011 c14
20ears
Excellent, very enjoyable story... Hit emotionally in the right spots, happy, sad, pissed.. Dick was hilarious when he lied to Logan.. Great job!

Excellent, very enjoyable story... Hit emotionally in the right spots, happy, sad, pissed.. Dick was hilarious when he lied to Logan.. Great job!
3/4/2011 c14 layoung13
what a great story! I love how you ended it farther in the future to show the great endings. Warm fuzzy feelings!
what a great story! I love how you ended it farther in the future to show the great endings. Warm fuzzy feelings!
1/23/2011 c14
23Nerdyesque
This was a fantastic story and I loved every minute of it. I'm so glad I came upon it.

This was a fantastic story and I loved every minute of it. I'm so glad I came upon it.
12/15/2010 c14
18HoneyBee1
Whoohoo, that was good. An epic story about their lives, and how it mirrored the lives before and after them. The angst and drama really made me cry, especially this one: "I breathe better when you're around". I just couldn't take it. Logan has been in love with Veronica ever since they were kids. That's just epic. Thank you for the happy ending!

Whoohoo, that was good. An epic story about their lives, and how it mirrored the lives before and after them. The angst and drama really made me cry, especially this one: "I breathe better when you're around". I just couldn't take it. Logan has been in love with Veronica ever since they were kids. That's just epic. Thank you for the happy ending!
6/17/2010 c14
2talichernin
For the most part this is quite good. However, I think Veronica would sooner have seen herself in a ditch somewhere in New York than to become a housewife and baby factory. It seems completely out of line with her character and a fairly disappointing end, to be honest.
I like what you did with Duncan's character, though :)

For the most part this is quite good. However, I think Veronica would sooner have seen herself in a ditch somewhere in New York than to become a housewife and baby factory. It seems completely out of line with her character and a fairly disappointing end, to be honest.
I like what you did with Duncan's character, though :)
12/7/2009 c14
4Tearle
It was cute, sad and angsty all rolled into one. I love the story you've made for them. Great work!

It was cute, sad and angsty all rolled into one. I love the story you've made for them. Great work!
6/30/2009 c14 firebirdgirl
Just sped read your fic. Totally awesome, I thoroughly enjoyed it! I LoVed the journey L&V took to find each other again. I'm glad that Donut finally got it through his thick skull that he doesn't always get what he wants. You nailed everyone's personality. Keep up the great work, looking forward to more of The Return. Happy writing!
Just sped read your fic. Totally awesome, I thoroughly enjoyed it! I LoVed the journey L&V took to find each other again. I'm glad that Donut finally got it through his thick skull that he doesn't always get what he wants. You nailed everyone's personality. Keep up the great work, looking forward to more of The Return. Happy writing!
2/3/2009 c14 bella
just re-read this and i still love it like the first time around
just re-read this and i still love it like the first time around
10/18/2008 c14
6Caremel
This is such a good story. The end is great, sweet and a little but sad. Your writing is excellent. Good job.

This is such a good story. The end is great, sweet and a little but sad. Your writing is excellent. Good job.