for Lily's Worst Memory1/1/2011 c1 
64BlOnDiE4
Very well written for this being your first :p
Just a few pointers, personally I don't like to have to many of own characters especially in a one-shot cause it makes it rather difficult to get all their personality across, and it leaves readers with so many questions.
Also I feel like there's something missing. I'm not sure what but maybe re-read over your work. Sometimes saying it out loud helps me :s hehe though at times I personally find it awkward to read it out loud.
:) GREAT story though! I would love to see what else you have up your sleeves!
A HUGE FAN,
Blondie
64BlOnDiE4Very well written for this being your first :p
Just a few pointers, personally I don't like to have to many of own characters especially in a one-shot cause it makes it rather difficult to get all their personality across, and it leaves readers with so many questions.
Also I feel like there's something missing. I'm not sure what but maybe re-read over your work. Sometimes saying it out loud helps me :s hehe though at times I personally find it awkward to read it out loud.
:) GREAT story though! I would love to see what else you have up your sleeves!
A HUGE FAN,
Blondie
7/24/2010 c1 1Hidden Traces
I feel a little bad for Lily when this happened- and shocked to think that Snape had called her a Mudblood before! When do you suppose that had happened? I think Lily would have been a little angrier and hurt, if I were her.
1Hidden TracesI feel a little bad for Lily when this happened- and shocked to think that Snape had called her a Mudblood before! When do you suppose that had happened? I think Lily would have been a little angrier and hurt, if I were her.
4/29/2009 c1 45Ciara in cotton socks
OMG I love this! Well done, you got Lily very well... And you and your friends seem very cool... Hahaha. Great work, great writing, look forward to reading more by you...
45Ciara in cotton socksOMG I love this! Well done, you got Lily very well... And you and your friends seem very cool... Hahaha. Great work, great writing, look forward to reading more by you...
1/24/2008 c1 10NobodyAtAll
Interesting take on the situation! I've always loved that Lily was annoyed by James for most of their Hogwarts years. There were some grammar mistakes, but overall it was well-written. :) Yay!
10NobodyAtAllInteresting take on the situation! I've always loved that Lily was annoyed by James for most of their Hogwarts years. There were some grammar mistakes, but overall it was well-written. :) Yay!
11/2/2007 c1 16notwolf
I liked this story. What I'd really like, though, is for someone to write a story telling why in the world Lily would ever start liking an arrogant prig like James! Maybe you could write a subsequent chapter on that.
16notwolfI liked this story. What I'd really like, though, is for someone to write a story telling why in the world Lily would ever start liking an arrogant prig like James! Maybe you could write a subsequent chapter on that.
9/15/2007 c1 6Kira2667
good story, that's my favorite part of the 5th book, i was so pissed they took it out of the movie.
6Kira2667good story, that's my favorite part of the 5th book, i was so pissed they took it out of the movie.
8/25/2007 c1 17tigerlily89
I liked it, It would've been nice to know what Lily was feeling at that time. Would you mind if I did a story on the same subject, only with her p.o.v. being a bit diffrent due to the information tha J.K. released in the final book? I'm asking because it was your idea, and i don't want you to get mad at me for stealing it.
17tigerlily89I liked it, It would've been nice to know what Lily was feeling at that time. Would you mind if I did a story on the same subject, only with her p.o.v. being a bit diffrent due to the information tha J.K. released in the final book? I'm asking because it was your idea, and i don't want you to get mad at me for stealing it.
6/20/2007 c1 79Animorphgirl
Love this story...it's a shame it hasn't gotten more reviews. Very nice telling of what happened in Lily's point of view...also good insight into her character. It's interesting to know that she's bailed Snape out of trouble more than once. I'd love to see more of this!
79AnimorphgirlLove this story...it's a shame it hasn't gotten more reviews. Very nice telling of what happened in Lily's point of view...also good insight into her character. It's interesting to know that she's bailed Snape out of trouble more than once. I'd love to see more of this!