for Teen Chosens10/14/2007 c6 
1frostneko
I can't believe this story has so few reviews! I's asome! I love the plot! Oh and con you make Lloyd say "Chosens Go!" that would be hilarious. I'm waiting for an update, but I understand. School.
1frostnekoI can't believe this story has so few reviews! I's asome! I love the plot! Oh and con you make Lloyd say "Chosens Go!" that would be hilarious. I'm waiting for an update, but I understand. School.
9/22/2007 c5 CommodoreZelda13
KRATOS! i was going to ask when he was FINALLY going to show up! KRATOS ROCKS! anyway, this story is okay so far. I trusting it will get more exciting soon.
KRATOS! i was going to ask when he was FINALLY going to show up! KRATOS ROCKS! anyway, this story is okay so far. I trusting it will get more exciting soon.
9/3/2007 c5 101Domomomo
YOU ALREADY ARE FULL OF AWESOME. my gosh.
and is Kratos Slade, by chance? because that would totally be like...the ULTIMATE win.
Keep it up, darling~! XD
~CJ
101DomomomoYOU ALREADY ARE FULL OF AWESOME. my gosh.
and is Kratos Slade, by chance? because that would totally be like...the ULTIMATE win.
Keep it up, darling~! XD
~CJ
8/16/2007 c4 cutepresea
Heh, yep, that's Raine for ya. Have you seen any of the anime yet? The second episode shows a bit of her Ruin Mode, and I have to say, it's rather scary. Hopefully you'll capture it whenever she's actually in the ruins. O_O
(my profile image is a pic of Raine hitting Lloyd that I drew lol, this chapter made me think of it for some reason)
Heh, yep, that's Raine for ya. Have you seen any of the anime yet? The second episode shows a bit of her Ruin Mode, and I have to say, it's rather scary. Hopefully you'll capture it whenever she's actually in the ruins. O_O
(my profile image is a pic of Raine hitting Lloyd that I drew lol, this chapter made me think of it for some reason)
8/11/2007 c3 cutepresea
Wow, I have to say, at least it makes sense and the ToS characters didn't completely take over the roles of the Titans. It would make complete and total sense that Lloyd fits the Robin role and Presea would have the Raven-ish role since they have the same voice actors (Lloyd/Robin and Presea/Raven I mean) and Colette just kinda strikes me as a Starfire. And the way you make Presea use the Devil's Arms...that's great. :D
Wow, I have to say, at least it makes sense and the ToS characters didn't completely take over the roles of the Titans. It would make complete and total sense that Lloyd fits the Robin role and Presea would have the Raven-ish role since they have the same voice actors (Lloyd/Robin and Presea/Raven I mean) and Colette just kinda strikes me as a Starfire. And the way you make Presea use the Devil's Arms...that's great. :D
6/27/2007 c2 5Aiwethryne
Chibi-licious! Mm... (strokes non-existant beard sagely) An interesting mix of comical fun here. Mm... The arshis as a human at last... Ah...
5AiwethryneChibi-licious! Mm... (strokes non-existant beard sagely) An interesting mix of comical fun here. Mm... The arshis as a human at last... Ah...