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PLZZZ UPDATE! ITS BEEN 5 YRS! PWEEEEZ
PLZZZ UPDATE! ITS BEEN 5 YRS! PWEEEEZ
6/6/2008 c1 
2bearablebrittany
hi. I'm the author of Flirting with disaster and I decided I would answer your question. Joshua took Jenifer to his apartment where she could get washed up. The apartment complex was abandoned years ago. That would explain the rusted gate from chapter 2.
You are a very good author btw. This story is very interesting.
2bearablebrittanyhi. I'm the author of Flirting with disaster and I decided I would answer your question. Joshua took Jenifer to his apartment where she could get washed up. The apartment complex was abandoned years ago. That would explain the rusted gate from chapter 2.
You are a very good author btw. This story is very interesting.
6/28/2007 c3 ReflectedIRony
aw, I like it :)
And its bloody amazing for a first attempt (hell, s' better than most of my current writing -.-' )
I love it when the characters aren't those beautiful flighty...THINGS that are usually used, although a discription of Lilly would be nice ;) *nudge nudge*
And the MASTER PLAN gave me a chuckle.
Keep writing, your on my alert list.
-Rony.
aw, I like it :)
And its bloody amazing for a first attempt (hell, s' better than most of my current writing -.-' )
I love it when the characters aren't those beautiful flighty...THINGS that are usually used, although a discription of Lilly would be nice ;) *nudge nudge*
And the MASTER PLAN gave me a chuckle.
Keep writing, your on my alert list.
-Rony.
6/19/2007 c2 19Ellen Jacee
HI!
Sorry, but I seem to be greeting everyone with an enthusiastic "HI!" this morning. It seems you got an extra exclamation mark. (Blame sugar.)
Excellent first chapter. I must say, I had great doubts about your summary, but this was nicely written - I was expecting something with not-so-great mechanics (no offense, but that's what I expected) and you turned out a lovely chapter with some background and excellent mechanics. It's very easy to follow and I like your writing style. I'll be interested in seeing how this shapes up.
Now, I can officially add this to my alert list.
Awaiting the second chapter,
Ellen
19Ellen JaceeHI!
Sorry, but I seem to be greeting everyone with an enthusiastic "HI!" this morning. It seems you got an extra exclamation mark. (Blame sugar.)
Excellent first chapter. I must say, I had great doubts about your summary, but this was nicely written - I was expecting something with not-so-great mechanics (no offense, but that's what I expected) and you turned out a lovely chapter with some background and excellent mechanics. It's very easy to follow and I like your writing style. I'll be interested in seeing how this shapes up.
Now, I can officially add this to my alert list.
Awaiting the second chapter,
Ellen
6/18/2007 c2 3rhythm of life
this will be interesting. i'm getting a little confused with all the switching back and forth from present day to past to flashbacks, but i think i'm getting it. i'm still not seeing much plot yet, but it is only the first real chapter. i think you could really get somewhere with story if you keep it up. keep writing.
3rhythm of lifethis will be interesting. i'm getting a little confused with all the switching back and forth from present day to past to flashbacks, but i think i'm getting it. i'm still not seeing much plot yet, but it is only the first real chapter. i think you could really get somewhere with story if you keep it up. keep writing.
6/17/2007 c1 19Ellen Jacee
Hm... I always thought a chapter was suppose to be, you know, a chapter...?
I like the premise of your story - someone physically different becoming mentally different because of failed expectations. The problem I have is with society - why are all blonde blue-eyed girls called "gorgeous" based on that alone? Face structure means more than hair and eye color... or at least, that's what I've always thought.
Seeing beyond beauty is a cliche moral that I continue to love, but would love even more if someone would just do it right. I've always felt that blonde-haired blue eyed girls get the short end of the stick; all the fairytales call them beautiful, but then everyone else bands together and shuns them for it.
So yeah. Not against your story, but society. I'll be interested in seeing how your story shapes up.
Ellen
19Ellen JaceeHm... I always thought a chapter was suppose to be, you know, a chapter...?
I like the premise of your story - someone physically different becoming mentally different because of failed expectations. The problem I have is with society - why are all blonde blue-eyed girls called "gorgeous" based on that alone? Face structure means more than hair and eye color... or at least, that's what I've always thought.
Seeing beyond beauty is a cliche moral that I continue to love, but would love even more if someone would just do it right. I've always felt that blonde-haired blue eyed girls get the short end of the stick; all the fairytales call them beautiful, but then everyone else bands together and shuns them for it.
So yeah. Not against your story, but society. I'll be interested in seeing how your story shapes up.
Ellen