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6/20/2007 c1 68Ryan Brooklyn
Aww, so sweet. Very well done. :-D
6/18/2007 c1 44Leah Naberrie
Oh this is adorable! *g*
6/17/2007 c1 29enchantedsleeper
Brilliant, I really loved it! Please, please, please write a sequel! You didn't need to worry about Elizabeth, she was really great. And I think you're the first one to have mentioned her mother, out of the fanfics of the young Will and Elizabeth I've read. I picked up one typo, here:

'her father would never suffer hearing his later wife being called “dull.”' - 'later' should be 'late'

Other than that, it was fine, and the bit where Elizabeth said, '“That kind of talk, Will Turner, is just completely unacceptable' made me laugh out loud XD

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