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7/4/2007 c1 10Nopa LaMais
I loved these poems! Sarah's poem was just so sweet and heart felt, and Jareths poem broke my heart!

But how in the world could you spell Jareths name wrong! For shame! :p ^_^
6/21/2007 c1 3NuPreacher
You should have another one which is Sarah's response to this one. When I read this poem, It was like Jareth stabbed her with his words. I really felt her pain. I guess, as a King, he's not one for forgive and forget.
6/18/2007 c1 97Nae'ka
I love the last few lines, very poetic. Great job!

~Nae'Ka
6/17/2007 c1 13yodeladyhoo
sniffle, sniffle.

There are some minor spelling errors, other than that, angsty.

Thank you for sharing.
6/17/2007 c1 65notwritten
good

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